Reviews for Correlation
Soul Jelly chapter 17 . 5/22/2016
I have had the most wonderful day reacquainting myself with your writing in a fit of Code Lyoko related nostalgia. I don't think I ever finished reading Correlation back in the day, but oh my god I adored it, from start to finish. I want to go through and dissect it all bit by bit, but I don't know where to start, the execution, the careful combing through of Yumi's feelings and her upbringing informing so much of her personality - perfect. And being a fan of Jeremie, Aelita and Odd, I was utterly invested in their story as much as anything else - "A dangerous spark between them" yes, yes, just perfect and fascinating too, particularly the muddled relationship between Jeremie and Aelita. I loved every last bit of their conversation in the final chapter, particularly them chiding one another over their use of money "i loved that Valentino more when you took it off" and "stop trying to predict what I'm going to say". I realised that your interpretations of O/J/A were probably one of the defining influences in my later writings about them, to be honest.

Everyone's personalities in this universe are all spot on, true to their original characters whilst being shaped realistically by their very different circumstances. I'm probably literally going to go back and read this all again tomorrow. Excellently executed, with all the appeal and charm and drama that a romance AU should have.

(If you're still around, and if you wrote anything else outside of FF dot net, I'd love to read it? You have such a talent and I'm a huge fan!)
From.Between.The.Pages chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I should have sent this review eons ago; I'm sorry that I only remembered today. Anyway, this is the first fic I ever read on this site and it will always have a special place in my heart. Your Yumi and Ulrich are perfection and the other characters are equally wonderful, each one fitting seamlessly into the plot. Well done - it's beautiful. Thank you for this fic.
Dr. Jeremiah chapter 17 . 8/20/2012
May I just say that your Jeremie speaks to me. Such a badass. It's like Jeremie, Artemis Fowl, and the Count of Monte Christo rolled into one package. I'm reading this for the Xana's Lair Book Club, so you may hear more from me, but i had to tell you this.
iz miz chapter 17 . 6/20/2011
Magic. A fanfic gem. I look foreard to reading more ofbyour work ;)
ChikaMegumi chapter 17 . 3/12/2011
I swear, I was gonna cry if Yumi didn't go to Germany. I feel like this is one if the only long term, well plotted, original CL fics out there, so I deeply thank you for it.

- cm.
EscapetoMusic chapter 17 . 1/23/2011
I am so... Confused. But it's ok, because I think I kinda understand what happened, but I still love it! :):):)
xWinniePoohx chapter 2 . 8/1/2010
Hahaha, OMG I haven't fully read this yet, but I can see the beginning of a beautiful fan-fic :))) Good Job!
natdrat00 chapter 17 . 11/16/2009
Excellent Finale.
J pickle YO chapter 17 . 11/7/2009
Woah! :D that was AMAZING

I noticed Your story still isnt makred as complete!

If this isnt the end and theres more to come then Im still so excited!

THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME!

keep it going if you can or write a sequel or sumthin!

Dont end my fav fanfiction story!

:D this was the best!
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 17 . 10/23/2009
Aw! *sniffles* So purty... *giggle* I liked the Aelita in this one. "I call dibs on naming your first born!" lol, I can imagine her doing that...
The Mad shoe1 chapter 17 . 10/20/2009
I love how you made Jeremie in this story, a bit cold but calculating and mostly in control.

BTW, what is the story between Odd Jeremie and Aelita? you didn't really bring it up.
Orishte chapter 16 . 10/13/2009
I have no idea what happens next!

I hope Ulrich doesn't take over his parents empire though. -He so doesn’t owe then any favors and I rather like the whole (relative)starving artist thing he’s got going ; )

Can’t wait to hear to hear more.
azn dreamer xD chapter 16 . 10/12/2009
This story is so amazing that I've been obsessively reading for two days and exclaiming, "I LOVE THIS STORY!" at random intervals. Your writing is so wonderful it makes me want to cry. How Yumi and Ulrich are both pretty messed up, but they still somehow fill each other's loneliness.

This story is absolutely beautiful. The plot, and ESPECIALLY the characters. It's so deep. I just love it. I love it, holy shit, I really love it.

Please update soon!

-Jenn

P.S. I don't know how it's going to end, but if Ulrich or Yumi dies or if Yumi decides to not be with Ulrich forever and ever and ever, I will most likely break down into spontaneous tears, hunt you down, be scarred for life, etc etc. (:
Shiningheart of ThunderClan chapter 16 . 9/9/2009
Well, it all depends. Yumi is in the same rebellious state of mind as Ulrich, and Ulrich is the type of guy her parents always wanted her to marry. Rich, successful, and well known. Does she really want to end up bending to their will yet again? Let them know that they affected her as much as they do across seas? Update soon!
peter van pickle chapter 16 . 8/17/2009
Well it was a good chapter or half a I think it could end by Ulrick gets the business but he ends up selling it because he did not wont anything to do with and Yumi and Ulrick can get together. And they can go some were with the money the got from selling the business.
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