Great story! I read it in a day and a half :)

God! So pathetic just like that stupid Bella Swan.

I know it's been almost 10 years now since this story was written but I just have to say how beautiful it was. I had major twilight fever back in 2009 just like you and this just brought back so many memories. I was watching twilight on tv the other day and remembering how much I love Kim and Jared and I guess one thing led to another and I ended up reading your story. I'd just like to let you know I loved it even in this day in age, I hope you see this comment, and I hope you've had a great life so far. JK forever 3 thank you for the beautiful story!

This is interesting, you're painting that stereotypical white, middle-class American teen story over a Native American reservation backdrop. They really seem incompatible.

Weird, I know, but it bothers me a that he keeps ordering Burger King food at McDonald's.

I love how in this chapter the pack all way in on the problem and try to calm Kim down. Gives a family feel.

So sweet. Perfect in it's own way

I'm glad she didn't start screaming

I'm glad you tackle the issue of what happens to friendship when boyfriends intrude

Good that Jared has some self-control

Wow

I really love that Jared had to touch her cheek a bit.

The epilogue is just right.

This story is bae

Wow what a chapter it was so sweet poor Kim still so shy I am glad she now knows just how much Jared loves her. Great story good job and I hope Leah find love in her life too...