Loved it but next time to a Leo x ralph :D

Poor Raph when donnie died also when leo died

more raph/donnie stories

Fantasticly simple, wonderfully illustrative, deeply moving. (could turn a couple of people on in certain placesXD)

I like it very much. Did you even have to think about this or did you just get along with this as it went? Cool fanfict.

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I read it twise and I can't stop thinking about it. It's somehow perfect in the way it is complete and doesn't need to be different. And besides it wakes up my own imagination. You've done very well!

Very much appreciated. I was immediately struck with an oh so true quote from T.S. Eliot: "If I had more time, I would have written a shorter letter." It's difficult to write a story as logn as the flippin' bible. But it's damned near impossible to write a short one. A collection of 50 one or so sentences that each tell a story themselves? Impressive.