Loved it :D

Protective and nervous John is adorable. The little bit of angst when Carson began talking about the nanites added quite a depth to the story. Nice work :)

I absolutely LOVED 'Hold on Tight' and this is a wonderful addition to that story! And if you want to write another sequel or two... awesome! ;-)

Ha! Love this! That would be the funniest thing - to all of a sudden be able to turn on the lights.

I love how you write Atlantis. I love how she communicates with John . . . great once again!