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   Wes1382 chapter 1 . 5/23/2019 Interesting. Your damn goo at writing lemons and limes. And all de kissy kissy sucky sucky stuff. (A little random ik) but yeah... *chuckles* Stories is in my favorites btw. |
| MiharuTousaka chapter 1 . 2/21/2019 This is amazing *bawls her eyes out* Will definitely be reading this again at some point TuT |
| ddwm91 chapter 1 . 10/12/2018 Thank you so much for this wonderful piece! |
| Idiot chapter 1 . 5/4/2018 Some people are freaking idiots. They think writing in English and using Japanese words is 'cute.' When what it really is, is the moronic stupidity of a deluded or possibly arrogant author. KNOW your reader base ... guess what, we're not Japanese and your constant reference to anime/manga language is distracting and annoying. I don't need some jiberty-jaberty-juju to make 'pinkie swear' meaningful. You've got sex on the brain or somewhere else you dweeb. By skimming through all the sex trappings, I was able to get through to the end. What, do you think love doesn't exist unless you describe every kiss, placement of tongue, or genital stimulation?! Damn, grow up. This story would have been good if it had been cut to half it's size and the focus cleaned up. Right now, I'm just glad it's over. Oh, because you won't understand it otherwise: Ja'ne! jsm |
| Forlane07 chapter 1 . 3/11/2018 wow just wow. Beautiful work. I applaud you! |
| YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 2/24/2018 Wow just wow that sure was long but I enjoyed it alot kind of like groundhogs day but damn 3 years of that man that sux glad it finally worked though and they got married in the end |
| qalleesyawesome chapter 1 . 9/15/2017 This is awesome and amazing. I couldn't get enough of it |
| halopro56 chapter 1 . 9/9/2017 This feels very similar to the VN Tomoyo After It's A Wonderful Life |
| lemon squeeze chapter 1 . 2/6/2017 Wow, I'm so glad I read this. This was amazing. Hot, emotional, romantic, humorous with a loy of mystery, drama ans suspense. Everything you want in a srory. Happy to say, one of my favorite oneshots on this site. Perfect. |
| Naru285 chapter 1 . 8/17/2016 Damn...holy hot damn...that was amazing. |
| SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 4/13/2016 Love it. Love it. LOVE IT! I'm literally in love with this fanfic. I read it 2 weeks ago and I can't stop reading it all over is by far my favourite narusaku fanfic. I cried at the end ! |
| Biblio388 chapter 1 . 7/24/2015 Not sure I want to read this again because I don't think I have cried this much in years. A very good story about hope. Glad I read it. |
| Falastineeyah chapter 1 . 7/18/2015 Easily one of my favorite fanfictions of all time! I always come back to my favorites to read this one. I love this pairing so damn much, it gives me life to read fanfictions that are good as yours. Infinity out of 10 rating. |
| TheExilez chapter 1 . 2/11/2015 Wow. This was simply amazing. I'm so glad I found this, it was an absolutely amazing piece of work. Thank you so much for this. |
| AD chapter 1 . 12/27/2014 Great story :) |
