maaaaaan deep and great

I loved this the end was so sweet :D

I was going to point out that you switch from past to present tense a few times but I guess that makes sense if part of it is the past and part of it is Aang's current dream. I like this overall, it's well done. I'll have to look up that picture-I love it when pictures have stories to go with them, or vise versa.

nice. i liked it :)

K.M

I loved it!

cool, I thought it was really cool...

Nice work. I like the idea of Toph and Aang taking on 'sneak attacks'.

"It's at this point that the dream starts to speed up. Skipping through his adrenaline-driven actions and hastily conceived changes-of-plan. And he hates the dream because those moments were the most fun he had had improvising on a mission ever before." This was my favourite bit. It's our first real indication it's a dream and it also lets us know it's a recurring one.

great job :

I have only one word for this, and that is "awesome." Love it! /

Ur not pleased wit this story?OMG i almost choked on my breakfast!This story is so awesome!

Taangese Ninja Mission! YEAH!

Loved it. Overall it could be a long, intricate story, but I almost liked it better short. Right to the point and to the Taang. Well done.

nice one-shot ;)

an awesome post for

Taang thursday ;D

You aren't pleased with it?

Sheesh.. speak for yourself, I almost choked to death on Iced Tea

So sad D: And yet really cute at the same time, its amazing how you do that.