Cute, really... Pit leave him? Thats so sad... But this story is awesome!

very good story and a cute pairing

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That was so unbelievably angsty.

I don't even know what to say.

Other than you've sucessfully left me overcome by feelings of sadness.

I'm not saying that it wasn't insanley amazing, (because it was) but I am going to have to go find a good fluff fic to life this mood.

You write good stuff.

Wow. I need to say that I am throughly impressed. This has to be one of the best SSB fics I have read, and I've read plenty.

I simply adore your writing style. The way you integrate Roy's personality into the text brings me much delight. It's so fun reading a piece with good voice.

And the Chu brothers-brilliant. The way you've integrated all the characters into a high school setting is just flawless.

I love this.

aw poor Ike! Please update soon!

Yay, this story is so sweet, it makes me smile! I know its random, but check out the song Viva la Vida by Coldplay for Marth! (I know it's random, but it really seems to fit him!) Maybe that could work! Oh, and I definately love IkexPit! It was so sweet, but so sad too!

Cute! _

You should continue this...

Because I want to know if Roy ever finds out his name :o

I'M SO RICH.

I'VE JUST WON THE LOTTERY

THIS IS THE LOTTERY

I don't normally read IkexPit-in fact, I don't really pay attention to it at all-but you make everything just sound the sweetest, don't you? x3!

So cute, and yet PARTING IS SUCH SWEET SORROW.. or whatever.. I don't know my Shakespeare.

ANYWAYS. AW. AW. AW. AW. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. HEARTS FOR YOU. LOVE YOU YOU, AND god. Keep on updating, pleasse!~ C:

Pika Chu and Pi Chu? XD

I really like this story!

This made me giggle. Very nice... Hope there will be more soon :D

AW

THATS SO CUTE! OMFG

Is this a stand-alone [I mean I know the next one is IkexPit but is there anymore MarthxRoy]? Cause if it is..

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SOB.

BTW - I love you. Favorite'd.

I like this! Update pwease!

First of all, I love how you added author's notes at the end. It shows how much you wish to communicate with your readers. Either no one instills them into their own projects, or the ones that exist are grossly ignored. I too use them, and it's always nice to see someone else put in extra effort. XD

Your descriptions are out-of-sight! You've got great potential to be an amazing author. I adored the last two sentences: 'Okay, first things first: ace that test. Then I'll find out his name.' This is going straight onto my favorites list. XD This was an incredible piece!