Update please

I'm sorry you didn't continue this story. I was enjoying it, and how it filled some off the blanks.

Again, you've captured each unique voice beautifully. I'm only sorry you've written so few. But, they hastily add, I savor each one. I rarely write reviews because I don't have a computer and it's ridiculously difficult to type and I don't think clearly.

First, I love how stubborn Alice can be. Second, these "fill in the missing details" stories are my absolute favorite! Perfect! You are very good at finding each character's 'voice'! I wish you'd write at least 100 more. Of course, if you did, I'd only wish you'd write at least 100 more!

Loved it! All of it. You're a great writer. I felt that it fell in line with the tone of Meyer's characters very well. Thanks so much for writing.

Wow I'm crushed that I'll never get my Emmett POV of meeting Bella and the Cullens hearing what happens in the woods before they get there. It's just really tragic because I was enjoying this so so so thoroughly and hadn't looked at how many chapters it had. I went to push the button for the next chapter and it just wasn't there.

It has been too long to answer your question and I could go on for awhile about it. Enjoyable reading the different pov's. Emmett's about Rosalie was especially interesting and gave some insight into their relationship. Jasper's was kind of fun reading his shock at Bella's reactions not being normal. Thanks for sharing.

So beautifully written

oh I like their bet banters

that garage scene was epic. It was soooo Twilight. I loved it.

a giddy Esme is always good

This is one of my favorite stories on this site. I forgot what this story was called and couldn't find it but then I finally saw this on another author's favorites list and I was really happy. You did such a good job with each character.

I am so disappointed that I have reached the end. Emmet hasn't even met her yet?might I suggest you continue at least until the end of the baseball game! Tough preferably the rest of the book.! I don't know when I have enjoyed a piece more. It completely captured their personalities.

I don't see how you could get better. This is wonderful and so enjoyable. I,hope you write more like these. Here's to hoping you do!

So well written. You kept the serious situation going but made it fun to read. I'm really enjoying this and I hope that you will add more there is certainly a lot of portentail for this story.

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