You like cliffhangers, but I still think that your a wonderful writer. I think you should be able to take your time writing, as long as you don't take a few years for one chapter. ;) Don't want you to get writer's block! (It happens to all great writers who rush things.)

Is she a hologram? Adrian should have checked by asking where she got the pendant froms

How did he see Lillith? Does she become a ghost in her visions?

Why do you need reviews? I think that your writings is terrific and you have a wonderful story line. I love reading your work.

If a ghost were to absorb all of Adrian's ghost energy from him, would he loose his ghost powers and form, turning him into a normal human?

It's okay, take your time. Your a very talented writer, but all you'll get is writer's block if you rush yourself to much.

Wow i did not realize that this story is 4 years old. I found this's years ago and somehow diverged from it and forgot about my obsession with DP and Next Gen. stuff. I really love this. Is this gonna be continued. Or is it in a different story or website?

These chapters are really good and interesting

I hope u update soon because I want to see how season end I am just hook on this

Please finish it's been 6 years. please.

Please update for me. You are talentive and smart and a great writer.

Please finish. I promise that your a great writer and your talentive and deserve to be a writer.

Never stop writing ever.

Amazing writer,amazing artist, wow never ever give up on your dream of being a writer.

I know you want to be a writer so never stop because you are great. .if you think you will never be a writer, you are wrong because you are awsome. Never give up on your dreams.