ADD MORE PLEASE!

Okay I'm left speechless;)

Despite how dislocated the actual story of this is, my god, the metaphors. They are brilliant.
And the dislocation is a stylistic choice. This is strange and wonderful. Thank you.

For me, I think I enjoyed the little scene with the Scarecrow the most. I love his line:

"Let me go and then come catch me, Batman," he's murmuring. "I'll get a new chemical ready and show you some nightmares."

What a great villain pick-up line!

GUH! THIS IS BRILLIANT. An absolute work of genius. I love how grim and gritty it is. Reading it feels like rubbing broken glass, but in a good way. Does that make sense? Probably not. But still!

What an amazing idea. You captured this interpretation of their characters incredibley.

YES. Scattered and strange, beautiful, disgusting, disconnected. Pieces of it felt overworked, but goddamn do I love the whole. Your unraveling Batman is especially twisted and mad, and while you've made his character something outside of canon, he still feels more than half-true. As if you've brought things to the surface that Batman would never acknowledge (or maybe even be aware of), but which exist in some deep place in his mind. Batman through a Joker lens maybe. Anyway, gorgeous stuff. You've given me a lot to think about. :)

ok ok this is good...it has something there u just need 2 develope it...hahahah

This is really freaking weird and I only half understand it...But it got my attention and I will no doubt come back and read it several more times when I've had some sleep...This story is fascinating really. Kinda creepy. *loves*

This story has entranced and enraptured me. I find it very interesting and logical that Bruce Wayne would be a little insane. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Hm. Hm Hm Hm.

Well then, this was rather fabulous. There was just something about it, something almost haunting that I couldn't really pin-point. I believe some part of me still doesn't fully understand it, but I found myself completely engaged anyway.

The only thing I'm not fond of is the title. I usually judge whether to read a story or not by its title, but I tried this one due to the positive reviews. It just doesn't sit right with the story to me, kind of giving a poorer idea.

However, it is your choice really. The piece is great either way, and I know that I'll be back to read this again. I also liked that you pointed out where Batman crossed a line he normally wouldn't, explaining why you did it anyway. Very respectable and forward. :)

I really can't imagine anyone better suited to take a run at this, at them, at Gotham itself. What a cesspool; but, in your hands, it puts its best side away and suddenly it's that beautiful cesspool I've been dreaming of. Oh, your pretty, creeping mind always comes up with the good stuff, and how.

I've been waiting ever since yesterday for something like this to be written. And thinking I would have to hunt it down, I was a little annoyed. But here it is, my favorite fanfiction author wrote it, and it's perfect. Exactly as I imagined. Thank you.