OAO Isaac...!

Awesome chapter, I hope Isaac goes back to normal soon!

Hm, this one is much more detailed and a bit clearer than the original. I see there are some different pictures after the Mercury Lighthouse one. Good call putting them in seperate paragraphs; it makes it much easier to read. Im really eager to see what goes on from here, and seeing the differences from the original version. I always loved this story, and i want to see how it all plays through. Keep going man.

It may not be a guarantee, but at least we (who haven't been given the ending) can hope now.

Hope life settles down enough for you to write this; it's a very nice story.

Nice to hear from you again. You should try to finish this story since I can not stand unfinished stories. This story was a good one too. You could change the beginning a little so it will be fewer places for Isaac and Mia to visit in order to retrive Isaacs soul. I really hope you will update regulary. :)

While convoluted and quite odd, this story is very interesting, especially since we are not omniscient. This is a very interesting story so far and it has potential, but it can definitely use a bit more explanation as far as when the ghost Isaac and Mia or the real group is preforming the actions; the Mercury lighthouse one was a bit confusing. Also, it could do to be a little longer than it has, while it does work how it is going so far, I kind of wish there was more story in the chapters. What I mean by this is that you write the important things, but you offer no real insight on what the characters are actually thinking. An example is the dull memory; they say that they think they know what the memory is about, but you do not elaborate any more. While this leave the thoughts open for the reader to interpret (Isaac avoiding the memory a bit), it still leaves a hole in the story and, for me at least, is a bit of an annoyance. Otherwise, I have been enjoying your story greatly, and I look forward to an update.

i like it overall, but how in the world could Mia and Past Isaac be in the past? / and that WAS short. _

I know how it feels to sweat through your clothes, its disgusting! Despite the fact that this was a very short chapter, it was a great chapter.

Keep it up! XD

Please continue. Update! :)

Nice chapter! I look forward to how this story will end.

This is a great chapter! I hope your next chapter comes soon because I still wonder about things, like Mia and the strange memory... and I also can't wait to read the rest of the story!

Keep it up!

Nice job so far, I love that Mia keeps knocking Isaac unconscious and reviving him :), she has a much better personality here than she does in the actual game ;). I don't think that I even need to mention the quality of gramma and spelling as yours is always fairly good.

I like the complicated plot in this as well, and the way that you've portrayed Isaac is pretty good too. Definately gonna check on this story as well as Sea of Shipping, keep it up and update soon!

Awesome! Please update. :)

This is really exciting! Please update. :)

Things are starting to get real exciting here! I haven't played the first golden sun so I don't exactly know what happens so this is giving me an idea of what the first golden sun is about. That's kind of cool how it's in the past and that it isn't just a memory.

Keep it up, I hope to read the next chapter soon!

Another well done chapter. Please continue. :)