Seriously hope you pick this up again soon

just want to point out that kakuzu is taller than hidan

It occurs to me how often people misspell wrath ad wraith. Wrath being a moment of expressed and uncontrollable rage while wraith being a ghostly figure. That said really enjoying the story so far and hope you take it up again soon

This was *so good*. I mean, honestly! I really like the characterizations, and I like your own personal spin you put on the Narutoverse.

The whole sub-plot with a rebel group trying to undermine Konoha is made very unique by it's goals, and the way it's not in-village.

I absolutely loved the emphasis, the weight, you put on Tsunade announcing Naruto as her successor, even in a private setting. It's small details that make this so good! Plenty of fics have it being announced to Konoha from a high balcony and there's cheering and it's just sort of done, but there's no emotion behind it. But in this fic, Tsunade tells a quiet room of officials and it somehow had more meaning.

The Naruto/Yugito relationship is kinda weird. Like, I don't know if they're together or not? Did they fuck or was that a dream? idk. Seems like you skipped around a bit with them.

I also like your Shikamaru- he's interesting.

Thanks for writing this, even though I don't really expect it to be continued ever. But please know that if you do decide to continue it, I'd love to read it!

Stop jumping around with the story

Well, shit seems things are not going well for the team anyways keep up the great work!

Damn This so good hope u can continue the story man

hello very good, I hope you continue at some point, seriously your story is very good and I would really like this as other stories that were not continued, no more greetings.

Update!

:-)

yoooo plz update brobeans this sotry is the cheeeeese

i hope you update soon! Geor-sama i love yours storys

Not like a Yang~! EH, EH~
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Time to hide.

You're an idiot that needs to die.

After having re-read both shinobi wars and eleven I have noticed something that has become pretty apparent. You seem to love having about 400 different story threads all going on at once. It was particularly apparent in shinobi wars. That's not a bad thing, I quite like both of your Naruto stories. It's just that that your stories seem to meander. You don't seem to have story arcs. You just have 4 or 5 different arcs all ongoing at the same time. It's something I think you could take a look at.

Well that is if you even feel like continuing on with your stories. Which I hope you do. A person doesn't read the 700-800k words you have in your different Naruto stories over the course of a week unless they enjoy their writings. Thanks for everything you've wrote.