I really like this chapter for some reason.

Poor Pony he's so delusional that he thought Steve was a socs. I really like the part where Pony started to fee nauseated and Steve got worried and regretted saying all those bad things to Pony.

It's cute!

Oh a very touching story. I love it. I always wanted to read something that discussed what occurred when Pony was sick. Now, I'm satisfied.

Keep up the good work!

Hey! Really liked the story. Was wonderin' though, where'd you come up with the title? Pink Floyd totally has a song with the same name.. haha just thought of that for some reason.

-Riley

You're a great writer, I always enjoy reading people's stories about what happened between Dal's death and Pony waking up.

I also like that Pony got closure with Dallas, as well as Johnny. He never really got closure when they were visiting Johnny in the hospital, and that kinda bugged me.

Keep writing.

-Riley

Wow. That was a really really good story. I was looking for a story with this plot line and I'm glad I found this one. I'm kind of sad it had to end but you know, everything has to end sometime. 3

that was amazing! i actually forgot i was reading fanfiction, i thought i was reading the book! i loved it!

you're a great writer

I love it! You rock! You did an awesome job.

Very nice. There's more I should be saying, but that's all my head can think: Very nice. Nice work. Nice writing.

Oh, that's classic! He ate bologna! HEE HEE.

Awesome!

i loved this story an when u write more outsiders fics please send me an email id love to read them :D

I like how you wove the events we know from the book with new events; everything fits together perfectly. I also like the idea of Johnny and Dally having a chance to say goodbye to Pony. That was really sweet.

That was like really good...

It made me sad, but also at the same time, I'm glad someone had some imput that could have actually happened of the times that he was sick. It was an excillent and creative idea :) And not to mention it was written out beautifully.

I think I liked the flashback, and the Darry/Ponyboy parts the best, cause they never showed a lot how Darry wasn't a rock, and actually had emotions, but you did it wonderfully.

This was a real unique story, and the description and stuff you used was awesome! Keep up the good work!

-zesty-

Ah! This is something new! Usually when somebody does the whole Poni-is-sick-and-need-to-take-care-of-him fic, it's usually done in either Soda's or Darry's POV. This is very interesting and written very well. Hah! Baloney...

Great ending. Thanks for a fantastic story!

u rock!

now about that new POnyboy story ur gonna write...,6