Wow. I... Words can't describe how happy I am that you wrote this.

Yay! Misora died! I mean... uh... how dare you kill Ms. Misora!... Anyway, good story. :3

I LOVED the story... But I do not like the ending. O_o Simply because I couldn't picture B doing that to Naomi as well the fact I strongly dislike sad endings... D:

But great story you have here! _ I only found like, one error, but it's not worth mentioning.

Do you have any more B/Naomi fics? Or plan to write any? I would love to read them...

Thanks for sharing!

~Kunai-sama.

Excuse me...*slaps BB silly*

That was pretty cool! Loved it actually! Go Beyond Birthday, I feel bad for Misora though. Lucky he numbed her. Great story, absolutely loved it!

I love it. Twisted and good.

Now That...Thats Twisted...But Cool! XD

LOLL an interesting twist. i wonder how L would react to B AND what Misora will do once she comes to her senses.

Wow, this certainly took me by surprise.

Haha, it's really good~

The ending is very suspensful, too! Tell me if you decide to continue it, 'kay?

This was gorgeous! Just the amount of sexual brutality i needed!

Hey! This is pretty good! Please tell me this is going to continue?

It was great

dunno what to say

read some of your stuff for a long time but...this is borderline snuff! Oi! I thought it would had ended differently...*not a snuff fan after looking through greyarchive stuff...*

bad...memories from that site.

it's still a new twist on the whole thing...and I actually want to see what would happen next but it's a one parter.

:(

Well that's an...interesting way to kill someone.

I do congratulate you for pulling me in and BAM killing my favorite gal.

No hate from this corner, though. But I don't think Naomi would let B do that to her, and B never intended to kill Naomi in the novel. But as you said, it was an experiment.