Hahaha, good one No 1. I love what he sent Trouble. You know those weird wedding thoughts.

You know Minerva is starting to get on my nerves. The sooner she believes Artemis the better or I will... yeah I don’t know what l’ll do nevermind but really she is starting to get on my nerves.

There is a part here that No1 sounds like he swallowed a theasaurus and all the knowledge went in him.

I DO not like Minerva but only because she did all those things to No1 and Holly like l heard but l have not read the Lost Colony yet sooo yeah but I still hate her but she seems nice here so l’ll give her a chance.

Aww come on Opal, the fu**ing, crazy, power hungry lunatic Opal is mentioned again but then again what is a AF story w/o Opal the crazy pixie.

I love it when No 1 is just like an inocent little kid just how Artemis was supposed to be like when he was about twelve like normal kids/tweens but instead he commited himself into doing crime as a teenage genius and mastermind.

But seriosly Opal does she really at least have to be alive in the story. Furthermore other than that the story is esquisitly well.

AMAZING! SO FUCKING AMAZING! GODDAMM! BLESS YOU!

best story ever!

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Headache here we come

I actually cried. One of the best fanfictions I've read in a very long time. Thank you.

Beautiful. Marvelous. Brilliant. Fucking amazing. You are a genius writer. What talents. Such power. I could sing songs of all the things you made me feel as I read the story for a fortnight. Excellent execution. I have never seen such a perfect execution of a story. Are you sure your username isn’t a pseudonym for a certain Mr. Colfer? I want to hug you for real just for this. Thank you so so so so so much for an amazing read.

Wonderful great ending good story

This was amazing, and the thing that would make it better is...A SEQUEL