*wants more*

I really like that story :3 And... emotions of characters. I like your Kanda, he is awesone.

I know it is kind of crazy to review and request this more than two years after you updated, but I really feel the need to. Your story has an extremely promising start and I really, really hope you can shake off the hiatus and continue/finish this fic. I'm not sure if you're still around or writing, but if you are and you see this, do reply! I wait eagerly

luff, Ele.

I like this I hope you add more

Love it :) Please update soon!

Go Lavi! Make sure your baby is safe... or I'll KILL you.

Great story... as a response to a challenge fic, I find it extremely good. Keep it up!

Gah! So sad! Poor, poor Kanda ... *is bawling her eyes out*

Wonderful job! I can't wait to see how Kanda deals with his post-traumatic stress disorder ... thing ... and how Lavi and Allen help make it better. Though, so far, Allen's doing the better job ...

Lavi, I expect more guts from you next time, mister! Great emotion, such a sad tale, but a very real one, I love it! Update soon.

i loved it a lot update son

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wow totally addicted to this story already

probably cuz i love kanda...:)

Ah I feel like I am reading this for the first time!

Oh my god, you have almost talked me into a Lavi pairing here! *is having serious inner conflict now* What to do, what to do!

I love this particular part, this soft part of Lavi, whom I think the fandom has deformed in a negative way. I am all aware of Lavi being a loudmouth and faker and flirt, but I don't like how many people exagerates over these things.

And the descrition of the way in which Lavi fell for Kanda, lovely! Not love at first sight, but it happened to him so out of the blue, when knowledge and familiarity were growing!

I also love how you explain more about Kanda saving Allen and Lavi and thus becoming easy prey for the Noah. yes yes yes Kanda for his nasty mouth is always sacrificing himself! *hugs kanda*

Please write more! This is the part where you stopped before, and I await the continuation with great expectation!

aww... lavi, you're so sweet! 3 yet another great chapter! here, i give to you a basket of delicious fudge brownies! XD can't wait to for next chapter!

This is so well done. You are treating a horrible subject with great compassion and believability. Your characterizations are spot on. Thank you for such a wonderful fic.