I just loved this fanfiction. I was reading it for days because I was so addicted to it. I have to say it was very well done. From beginning to end and it really kept me in suspense on what was going to happen next.

My curiosity is growing. I wonder what's going to happen throughout 43 more chapters. I hope a lot goes down. XD

When you finish playing kingdom hearts 3 and you gatta go back to all the fan fictions you read. Lol our boy roxas went and busted a nut deep inside them sugar walls. Got himself some creampie action now i remember her getting pregnant.

This story has some good potential, but it is so hard to look beyond the numerous grammatical and spelling mistakes. I can definitely understand that, if English isn't your primary language, but either way we gave a beta reader function. If someone is doing that for you, then I highly recommend you switch readers, and plow through the chapters to clean up the errors. As it is, I need to stop reading this...even though I don't want to.

I love it. Aqua's baby is so cute... but I'm a little sad that ven wasnt in the story.

This is ok but please stop with the gay stereotypes thx its really insulting

I'm crying right now.

It is quite nice, good job!

I CANT STOP LAUGHING XD OMFG SORA REALLY!

Hey, hello! :)
I don't know how to tell you how much I love this story!
I always known that it would end with a RokuNami and I so happy for it, 'cause RokuNami is my OTP 3
Every time I could read a new chapter of The diary of Namine I felt so happy, even now when I finished to read the story.
I loved so much every characters of this story... I like so much as you characterized Sora, Roxas and Namine especially, after all they are the main characters!
Really, I don't know what to say because I know that no words would be enough to tell you how much I love this story... suffice it to say that this story is so well written that, for example, when Roxas was kidnapped by Vanitas... and Ventus was murdered in front of his little brother... or when Sora told Roxas that it was his fault that Ven was dead and that he would prefer that it was Roxas to be dead... I don't know how to explain how much I felt bad for Roxas in those moments.
When Namine found out that she was pregnant for the first time I felt somewhere between happiness and concern... I was worried for both Roxas and Sora's reaction and I felt relieved when Sora has forgiven Namine and Roxas for go to bed together :)
For all nine months of pregnancy I was hoping to Roxas to came back to Namine, and the day of the concert, when Roxas comes down from the stage and runs to Namine and they say "I love you" to each other... it was very exciting!
And even after when they was at the hospital and Vennis and Soren were born... I loved that chapter! And they are a very happy family! :D
I hope that Vanitas will be accept also by Roxas and Namine... I know how they felt about him anyway :( but he has suffered much in his life too, so I was happy when Sora decided to make him part of his family... even though I felt bad also when I known that Vanitas has murdered Ven :(
However, I love this story so much! 3
Thank you for writing it, it make me feel happy :) 3

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I know this story is extremely old and finished, but it slightly irks me that sora beat roxas to the punch. Still, I'll continue to read on and hope it can be redeemed lol.

This was such an amazing story and surpise that I read it in about 3 days. I love this story so much that I'm a bit sad that its over. You write such amazing storys. Keep doing what you're doing because what you do is going to be fabulous~! Love ya !

I knew it! All along! I knew they had another brother that died! I just knew it! (and I knew it would probably be Ven) Awesome chapter! can't wait to see Namine's answer to Sora and the details about Ven's death and why Roxas blames himself T-T

Haha, another great chapter XD
Though I must say I saw all of things coming (Especially Sora kissing Namine while being drunk, that was a classic XD)

Loved this chapter just like the first one, it's more interesting than what I thought it would be
'Kingdom Hearts'... That's an original name for a band lol and it makes sense Roxas would be the singer, after all he is dubbed by Jesse McCartney XD