hey! just a heads up, slash is male/male, femslash is female/female! merry day!

I hope Luna gets to have Hermione in the end. Its a good read so far.

I really enjoyed it :)

More!

update pls?

OH MY GOSH! that was so unexpected! I loved it. It WAS great.

Was pretty good untill chapter 7ish... I wonder why there has to be always some cheating going on. And if its f/f couple it's often with male. Thats just stupid and I dont get why authors keep ruining good stories with it. Well, still looking forward to read more.

Right, not many good ones out there, but this is pretty good. Ya know, for an OOC fic anyway. That last one was HAWT, despite being short. All in all...Professor Soren gives you an Acceptable. Work on your grammar and spelling. Remember to proofread.

Ta,

Soren

Sigh. Suppose I wasted my time in reading this. It's a sad truth that many femslash stories are twisted out of horrid views, and people have no idea how to properly write it without incorperating males in some way in it. Rather disturbing, since that's not how relationships work, nor romance, nor ANYTHING having to do with love, but some people are just incompetant I suppose.

So by "Twist" You mean horrendous fucking act of bullshit and betrayal. God I hate it when authors throw around cheating for god-awful reasons, and the unlikely response count in this story is through the roof.

10 out 0f 10

dedicated to...Tyler? *rolls eyes*

I love how this is coming along so far. Keep it up please

I'm re-reading this again and I love it! 3

Please update soon! Ireally want to know what happens.

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