Reviews for Big Boy
Guest chapter 1 . 9/23/2018
i love it!
TiberiusHallas chapter 1 . 1/31/2015
Chapter 2?
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
Eep! xD hahaha
...neat oneshot... e.e *shifty eyes*
xD
Daphmir57 chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
Oh, ZaKai. Ands remember, don'ts apologize for somethings you enjoyed!
Tainla chapter 1 . 7/15/2013
omg, that was freaking perfect!
DrummerDancer chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
Loved this!
Bishie Huntress chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Hahaha! Ed's such a tease! XD

This was pretty hot. I liked how you built the tension. And, of course, how Roy was left hanging. LOL Great job!
woodlandfairykirk chapter 1 . 10/14/2012
Ed shoulda smiled and been like "yep, that's what my mom did when I got a boo boo" (:
yoloswagmaster chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
WAHH! So adorable :3
Devlin chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
if someone could see me while i read this, they'd be giving me weird looks by now. i had a frown on my face reading the first part of the story [i once got a door slammed on my fingers and the pain literally had me skipping around, cursing] then my smile got bigger and bigger as i progressed in the story. i loved how you made it so that Roy was the one left flustered this time and Ed being the 'naughty' one. the last paragraphs just left me gaping, especially Ed's last line, he's such a tease.. anyway, I LOVE IT!
BattyCore chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
Aww, that was cute! And you have quite a writing style; I really love it~ You're a visual writer. :3
Varia no Shizue chapter 1 . 4/4/2011
''I'm a big boy now.'' *dies*

I love the suggestive-ness I think I'm glad there's no lemon in here, it would feel wrong here :)
Katie - Lyn Della Robia chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
I bet you did, but you know what would be even better? A sort of Sequel thing wherein Roy goes to Ed for more... Just a thought! ;D Wink, wink. Nudge, nudge.
Phoe.nyxus chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
Literally left me gaping, I had to learn to close my mouth again XD

Hah, that was great!
starlesscity chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
"I'm a big boy now," Ed said. "Just thought I'd let you know."

Fuuuuuuuck.

That one line made my whole stomach drop. 3
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