Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed reading it. There were some unanswered questions, like who Edward was talking to early on and what it even meant...?
I see they won gold but nationals? Olympics? It never said. If it was olympics then I don't think they could even get there without competing and doing well at nationals first.

Maybe Bella should have mentioned that she wasn't doing anything to Edward that he didn't do to her. I'm still having trouble getting past the part where Bella's safety isn't the number one concern.
Who is Nina to tell her not to get involved with Edward. It was fine to make Bella aware of the situation but wrong to tell her how to handle it.

He willing to risk her life? What the hell is wrong with him.

Love it and I'm only on chap 3 x

What happen to her car?

the story was really cute good job

Enjoyed it. Thanks

That was funny

That was intense. What was he doing?

ahn... I'm not american, I'm from another country... can ya tell me what's "RSVP" ? I never heard it before, but it looks like it's an answer... am I right?

LOL this was the funniest chapter yet i couldnt stop laughing

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I go to a performing arts school. I'm a vocal major, but my friend does ballet. She never told me what it was called, but I realized when I saw the link that I can do a Tour Jete. Yay!

I really like it

thought it was a great plot

and an interesting story

the ending was a bit sudden but good

best of luck

~ABF~

OMG!

awwwwww! thts story was friggen AMAZING! it was soo mushy and cute at the end! i was acyually aweing and squeeing!

nd the song "love story" as their performance peice was unexpected but i LOVED the routine!

thx for this awesomely amazing story :) it was awesome to read :)

till next time

xx

Izzy-Rose