This was fun! I greatly enjoyed it.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Great story, lived the way you brought them together in a way that wasntn imposible!

If only this one shot had more than one chapter. But I guess that's half the charm of a one shot, to leave you curious and wanting more. Which is why I don't like one shots, but this was pretty good. I like how fun it was.

At first, I was a bit dubious and found it a bit out of character for Batman to simply give in to Joker like that, especially since he just killed Alfred in front of him LOL. With the title, I thought it was going to be more light hearted.

But I was wrong... though I can see this happening if Bruce's sanity cracked and Joker being Batman's only loving-yet unstable-anchor. I dunno, but they way you write Batman/Joker's relationship in this reminds me a lot of how Scott Snyder writes them and I really like that. (Though, thats coincidental since Scott didn't write Batman comics until a couple of years later after this fic was made.)

Ahhhh... no. Joker killed Alfred. You beat up the man you literally JUST killed your best friend and basically FATHER. You don't immediately fuck them... Don't get me wrong, I love this pairing, but no. No fucking over Alfred's dead corpse. -.-

Oh, this is sweet and strong, a tangle of words and breaths and bones. Your writing is sharp and deep, your characters full of life. Great job.

Hah! Finally, someone wrote a Bruce and Batman are two separate personalities!

Wow. You got their personality just right!

I read this story on my 3DS. And I loved it. It was so gripping, so real in so many ways, I want to make a comic strip out of it in my spare time. The emotional need of want and rejection is just profound. I have no other words to describe how much I liked it, I certainly hope there's more to read. I was relieved toward the end that Alfred was okay, actually. A breath taking experience, i'm on my way to your second batman story now.

To...much...fluff... ::hacks loudly :: ITS IN MY LUNGS! !

Aww. That was lovely. I like how, in the beginning, the Joker was sad because Batman didn't show up...

It's kinda trippy and there are a few little bursts of oocness but it's quite sweet and I do so love that sense of almost desperation that seems to permeate the attitude of the Joker and also to a certain extent the Batman... I was scared for Alfred cause I love that guy but since you didn't kill him I didn't get too upset :)

loved it

yaaaaaaaaaaaay thanks for the great story i loved it. thank youuuuuuuuuu. please write more like it.

THANK YOUUUUU