-le gasp- this one... really got me. It's... oh, Ra... really nice... beautiful.

Don't keep putting yourself down about these! -cries- they're wonderful! AND I HATE THE PEOPLE WHO ARE TOO HEARTLESS TO REVIEW! -protesting and rioting-

Please keep going!

-Sammi

This one is more fatherly. But it's still just as good, nakama!

You're very good at writing poetry... :)

-Sammi

It's haunting... and at the same time, prettyful. I likes it...

...Now I'mma read the rest of them!

-Sammi

I liked this. It's short, simple, and to the point; plus, it makes one think.

Besides reviews, what inspired you to write this? Is it one three-stanza poem or three one-stanza poems?

This is good! Keep it up! _