Reviews for Termination
L YNAL chapter 1 . 3/29/2017
I'm honestly against abortion and sometimes, I really hate the women that choose to abort their babies rather than keep it, but I also understand that circumstances happen. We don't always have a great life. And it'll be even worse if you keep the baby and end up killing it or something (I've seen it in the news). But yeah, I don't fault a person for what they choose, but some people really just choose abortion because they hate children. That's what I don't like about it.

So, I guess I'm kind of it the middle, huh?
pat123 chapter 1 . 11/25/2016
i love this an
Mikhala chapter 1 . 2/6/2016
I agree that women should choose if they should have the baby or not and the father should have say as well I also have to agree with that comment at the end of your story
RhyeMeow chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
This was a pleasure read. :)

First, you showed raw emotions as Naruto kept coming back and forth, calling her baby a parasite or, well a baby. That itself showed how much she was struggling.

Yes. Like you, i am neither pro or against abortion. Circumstances happens. I also experienced the same thing when i commented on an issue presented over heated debate. A woman raped and she has mental issues, our country doesn't permit abortions. Sad that she has no choice.

Anyhu, good work. I also love how you showed Itachi's side of things as well. And the ending was touching.

Kudos,

Rhye
SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
That was truly beautiful! XD XD 8-D
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Got no words for this...at least not yet, first let me get over these emotions I'm currently feeling...
Beautiful...would be too less of a compliment for it.
Korregidora chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
I cried, darn you, but they became happy tears when it was revealed Naruto didn't go through with it. Just glad it ended happily.
mousey45322 chapter 1 . 4/14/2014
This story was simply striking, it grabbed my attention as well as my emotions. I cried, I actually cried, when I thought she went through with the procedure.

And honestly I'm going to stop reviewing now, because if I don't I'm going to ramble Bout the same thing over and over. To make it easy I'll put it in a sing sentence; Amazing story, well written, abd like a good book I could feel the emotion.
Bear chapter 1 . 1/7/2014
Thank you very much for writing this story.
yaoigirl2000 chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
I see your point on the abortion think I believe that there is a point when abortion is need like rape for one I use to think that all people who did abortion should go to hell but after watching a true movie and talking to my mother about it I stat to look at it differently
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Oh my god. I cried so much I couldn't read the screen properly. Really good fanfic
luversblues chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
this is beautifully written! I absolutely love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
i think ur wise 4 thinking that
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2012
Interesting. The idea of abortion lies along with the sense of obscenities. But I believe every person has the right to choose. If it so happens to be the way for that person, who are we to judge. But I'm glad in your story she did not abort. After all, this is fiction. Let it be a happy ending cause we all know reality is difficult enough.
6th Street chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I've always liked this story. I've read it several times before, but yet I've had the courage to actually post a review. Sounds weird, yes, but I'm still rather new to the whole FFN thing and it's the Internet after all.

You've managed to portray the thoughts that goes through a woman's mind when it comes to pregnancies - specially of the unexpected kind - and I salute you for that. I guess they could have been a bit more detailed, but for a one-shot, I think it fit really well. I like Itachi's reaction towards the end as well, he reacted like most fathers would have.

So thank you for posting, this is definitely going to my favourites. Also, if you don't mind, is there a possibility for you to take a look at the only story I've posted here? As I mentioned, I'm still rather new and all, so I have yet to create a network. It's of the more explicit kind, yes, but it revolves around a female Naruto and it's a one-shot. It's an art to be able and write one-shots, and I think you've done extremely well with this one, so you if anyone is the right to ask I think.

Cheers.
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