| Reviews for Incogitance |
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   Hailing Storm chapter 6 . 7/8 Spoiler alert: … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … Actually, Rippletail has a bigish part in The Fourth Apprentice. |
| Hailing Storm chapter 1 . 7/8 Thank you. AshxSquirrel is much better than SquirrelxBramble (well…before Long Shadows). |
| Forestfire34720 chapter 12 . 11/20/2017 That was a good story. It seemed realistic enough for me, but to be honest, when it comes to cats and personalities and those subtle small lines between good and bad... I suck. Something might be very unrealistic, and I think it comes off as realistic. But for a story of this direction and nature, I think you did well. Bittersweet ending, too. |
| LavenderCrystalOfRoses chapter 12 . 6/13/2017 I don't mind Birchfall. It doesn't make sense, but it feels right. |
| Blackheart chapter 2 . 3/8/2017 JESUS it is hard to find a fan fiction of this quality on this amazing ship its in my top 5 favorite ships. This story is up there in my tops, if you could write one of Jayfeather and I dunno Briarlight, then I would be like, sign me up i gotta review it everyday! I can find no flaws in the story but a few spelling mistakes and mentioning of things they don't actually know. ~Blackheart of River Clan |
| Guest chapter 3 . 9/4/2016 030 |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2016 You are so wrong, Ashfur tried to kill them all |
| NightFallEclipse chapter 12 . 2/23/2016 ...Wow. This Is My Review For The Finished Project: Is It NOT Good To Fan-girl Over This? The Story-line Was Immersive And Clever, And Very Descriptive. Somehow, This Manages To Remind Me Of My Warriors Fan-fiction That's not Written YET. |
| NightFallEclipse chapter 2 . 2/23/2016 This Is ... Amazing. It Makes Me Think This Would Be How AshFur Felt. I'm Still Reading this, Of Course, But I KNOW Bramble's Gonna Kill Firestar In The Blood Will Spill Blood Prophecy. |
| Stardust in my Soul chapter 12 . 6/8/2015 YES! SO GOOD! |
| Photography Bird chapter 12 . 1/26/2015 Holey. That was so unexpected. They all just, died. Firestar. Brambleclaw. and Ashfur. I think Hawkfrost died.. too.. and.. all.. I.. I don't even know anymore. Poor Squirrelflight, though. (I love this story/chapter and all these twisted plots! This have been, by far, the best warriors story I've ever read.) |
| Photography Bird chapter 6 . 1/26/2015 ... R-ripplepaw... Y-you, I.. wow. She was only an apprentice ;u; Brambleclaw... w-why... Hawkfrost.. you.. I.. can't ;w; (wonderful chapter! that plot-twist, though.) |
| Photography Bird chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 I SHIP ASH X SQUIRREL SO HARD. I WAS BRAWLING WHEN SHE CHOSE BRAMBLE INSTEAD. They would've made so many cute little ashfurs and little squirrelflights together! |
| Loki-Scamander chapter 1 . 1/12/2015 Ya you should have ash die in misery |
| lesbiansandstorm chapter 12 . 6/23/2014 Sandstorm as leader... Omg. I think she should have been leader in the books. |
