Omg, the fluffiness! Angeal's so effing romantic omg i want him too ahahahhaa. Anyways i love this oneshot. Though the ending was too angsty for me, so i'll just ignore the ending and pretend that they had their happy ending :D

I love this :) you did such a great job and I wish there was more Zangeal out there

What can I say? Flawless.

xxx

*dawww* That story was so sweet. I actually laughed at one point (happy laugh) Anyways the ending was sad but you did the whole story very well. It was a little abrupt at first but I think you got it right. Thanks for the story!

So cute how Angeal was so into it when he thought it was a dream and then had a minor panic attack when reality made itself known.

Why did you have to add that depressing ending in there?

WAH! IT IS SO KUTE, SAD, HOT...and and HOT! I loved it! *Sniffle*

That was so sweet! The end killed me though [ I'm going to have to check out more of your work!

I think the beautiful tenderness of the rest of the story is what makes the ending so completely heartbreaking. I always come into a Zangeal story slightly wary, because I know how their story ends. Your writing made me let my guard down, though. Fantastic job, really. You captured their relationship and the general mood of the Final Fantasy world perfectly, in my opinion. And, as an added bonus, made me a little teary eyed.

O... wonderful, hot, I love it.

But the end - I was like wtf?

lol, I know, it cant be happy endings everywhere (but Ill make it in my mind anyway ;o)

i didnt review on everything, but i read and loved it all

Heartbreaking ending aside, omigod I love you. This had it all, hotness, sweetness, and despite what Zack claims, total authenticity.

Zack: "Actually, aside from the sex, she got Angeal pretty well. Not bad."

Ooh, way to go, he's impossible to please. But Cloud's not.

Cloud: *giggle* "I loved it!"

Sephy-Pants: "I enjoyed it also. I'd like to see them act it out."

Angeal: *smiles* "Thank you, Scripta. Amarissia and I agree that this was worth waiting for."

Oh wow, this was amazing. The end was a bit depressing, but it still worked really well with the rest of it.

That was hot and sweet... and then the last few lines kicked me in the stomach. Stupid canon. I was all set for fluff, and now I feel slightly weepy.

The world needs more Zangeal, keep writing :)