Reviews for It went bang |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You can't leave this unfinished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I first found this on Ad Astra... Was wondering if you were planning on do more on this story line? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, listen, a deal: - you finish this one - I finish Maze Run What say you? |
![]() ![]() This is a great story. Would like to see Sulu explain how he escaped the bathroom. Please continue this story. |
![]() ![]() How I wish you would continue this. I'm dying to know what happens next. Love your writing. |
![]() ![]() You should continue this, it's really good. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT! No no, you MUST finish this story! Please? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Reaching in with his mind, he tripped the neurons that controlled his captain's fingers." That line is SO good. I love this story! How come I never found it in the archives? Now *you*'re detrimental to *my* housekeeping! Gardener. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Please finish. This story is soooo compelling and I need another fix. |
![]() ![]() O'my Goodness, You need to continue this! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story started out great! I loved the description of the ship falling down around them...and of course the kirk h/c! Please update - keep it going! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Noooo! I hate cliffhangers. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() dear Lord this was amazing! wow, man, seriously, I haven't felt so consumed by a story in a very long time! I was laughing out loud to a subway filled with people! you are totally amazing man! so classic, so thrilling, finally someone who know how to write! keep it up dude, I am so excited about this! It's a rare treat to find treasures like this on |
![]() ![]() ![]() I stumbled across your story, and what a good fall its been. What a masterful job you did with non-stop action for 7 chapters. Lots of detail, but always kept moving. It's a great premise also. To go so far as the actually distroy the Enterprise (you are brave). I can see you've been writing this for a long time, so I'll hang in there and wait patiently for where we are all going next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. so glad you are working on this again. Im excited! |