There's no such thing as HADN'T OF. Just use HADN'T.

Yeah, way to fast

Is this moving a little fast?.

He seems pushy

It’s a conflict of interest for Jasper to be her psychiatrist when they’re friends.. It’s not right.

They didn’t seem to be searching hard for her. He was in Forks before, why weren’t they searching the motels and hotels before then? There aren’t even any hotels there btw. Where were the police?

No! I guess I spoke too soon. It’s a mistake to wait to tell him. She needs to tell him and everyone else immediately. Is she not scared for her life? Laurent needs to be removed and arrested ASAP. He’s working with her sick sedatistic rapist for gods sake. Edward doesn’t even care about his birthday!

Ugh. I can’t believe Bella believed Laurent about being on his phone with an informant. He said he’d turn him in himself, clearly it’s someone wanted by authorities. She should have been suspicious right away. I’m glad she caught him on the phone the second time and wised up, though. I’m relieved. There are so many dumb Bella’s fics out there where she misses the most obvious signs.

What! No way can James be out of prison? There’s no way. He kidnapped a minor and held her captive for days and repeatedly raped and beat her. He would have gotten at least 20 years to life in prison. Omg.

If Edward is a surgeon he’d be older than his late twenties.

It's a great story. Very emotional. I loved it!

Great story. I look forward to reading more from you!

It is incredible , the pain on both sides of these relationships after an assault. Well done
R

Yeah, finally a kiss!

About time they got some help. Wouldn't Jazz be too close to treat them? Not to mention v what he might reveal to his wife about them.