I love it, i can't wait to read what happends next. There is nothing else to say... I just love it! 3 :)

Great job!

I think there might be more to this rust than what meets the eye, considering that it behaves less like metal and more like a virus. I think this could get very intriguing very quickly.

Loved the story haha, please make many many many many many more xD

catcha later

- GRAAG

This is getting very very interesting, can't wait for next chapter

Wow thats some Virus. I cant belever you made 3 chapter thou. This was the best Christmas gift I got this year.

All right another update so soon is all was good. Now please tell us about the Rust soon.

Gaah...loved it so much I want to read more! I thought the fight scenes were good and the addition of Takeo adds a sympathetic touch to the story of Hisao.

OH well that sucks, cant wait for the next chapter

The fight was good. I have try afight myself and now how hard they are. I like the part about the flower but dont now why.

I'm seriously addicted to this story now. Bravo!

Finally, a sensible Ino/Choji fan writer. Thanks heavens. Cute beginning, a little sadness but yay for promised Ino/Choji. And Choji is not just a fat guy, he totally rocks (I'd love to hear his english voice actor say the phrases dude, cowabunga, or anything about pizza because it's the same guy that did Michaelangelo in the live action Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtle movies) and Ino, I haven't read many fics where Ino is treated in any decent many (most seem to like to portray her as a woman of loose morals) but there are some but like you said, they are a backseat pairing. Great start.

Only 5 reviews! Well that just won't do. Your fic is way too good for that.;)

It's so great to finally find a good InoXChouji fic. I'm huge fan them, written three stories of them. Thank you so much for writing this!

-Blondi

Hey this is good, rust is something i've never seen used before, very imaginative.

Oh this is get good. I cant wait to see what the rust is all about.

I know what you mean. I am totally in love with the Shikaxtemari pairing. IT makes a hell of a lot more sence then Inoxshika. and anyways Chouji and INo were meant for eachother! They just don't know it yet. lol nice first chapter kind of slow.