Reviews for Desolation |
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JaneK26 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010 I feel like I'm repeating myself but i have to say it again. Your stories are great! They're not fluffy and silly, they have up the good work!:) jenny |
nicole chapter 1 . 9/23/2008 Like OMG this is SO beautiful and well written so sad but really amazing work |
TheStrangeAndBeautiful chapter 1 . 9/4/2008 This is really good! Very beautiful and a good idea. |
Tidwell chapter 1 . 9/1/2008 You have an interesting style: poetic without going flowery on us(although the line about blue-green eyes focused on his cerulean ones...I might have omitted). I like how you reminded us of the more naive, smitten Allison. Meshing the memory of that woman with the somewhat guilt-ridden, broken one we saw at the end scene of "Informed Consent" is jarring and effective. Nice work. |