Love it so far! Keep up the great work! 3

Great job on the chapter please update soon thanks.

I'm really surprised to see that you have updated this story after such a long break but I am so glad that you have. I always wanted to see where you would go with it. I can't wait until your next update.

Leo looks so surprised because Raph is in there...What Raph will say once they see each other? I hope they don't fight and they do the thing as a team...as they always have to be. Please update soon. Good chapter and I'm so glad that you update this story. Good luck and take care

Love this story and you totally left all of us hanging, dude! "So the next one shouldn't take nearly as long"... Really? Ugh. Please tell me you didn't just give up on this and you're just having a really hard time with this chapter!

While it seems clear that this story has long been forgotten and that this comment is unlikely to have any impact, if it is read at all, I can't help but say how impressed I am with this story so far. It is such a great idea for a fanfic and has been handled so well I think it is truly a shame that we will not get to read more. I know I would love to find out how things would have progressed.

Please do not stop writing this story, I need to know if Leo is gonna make it or not, please do not abandon this sotry, keep writing and do not give up, please I beg you.

OH NO! WHAT IS TAKING SO LONG? PLEASE! PLEASE, DON'T TELL ME YOU DIED! NOOOOO!

Great job on the story, I liked it alot, please keep going an
and update real, real, real, soon thanks.

Great job on the story so far, I liked it alot, please keep going and update real, real, real, soon thanks.

Hi! Please update this soon! I've just reread this for the -I don't even know how often I reread this. You are good! You seem to have a talent to get into the guys' heads and I like that. I love the angst and tragedy and all the sad emotional stuff, but I want to see them getting and being finally back together! I want to know what the canhead is up to! PLEASE UPDATE THIS! :) soon prefferably

I think you was spot on with Raph. Don't worry about the length...sometime it doesn't take much to get the point across..and you did just that :) I hope that you can update soon. I'm looking forward to more.

I liked the chapter! You portrayed Raph well, but- just not long enough. ;-)

Is Leo going to wake up? Please say yes; he can't die! I'll be devastated. ('So will Don, Mike, and Raph)

Your writing style is really good and I'm really liking how you are portraying the characters. Very realistic.

Great job! I look forward to the next chapter!

Ha Ha, Tell 'em, Mike!

These last couple of chapters have been so good I couldn't stop to write a review! (sorry)

Apathy, is always a bad thing, Don...

Another great chapter! I really njoyed it!