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cute story

Great story. Alec was in character, watching Max's back as always. I also liked that you had the two get together without making Logan a total jerk. Thanks for sharing/

I liked this story. Well done. Would have loved to get a little more from Alec and Max and the end to see how they treated and reacted with one another after all of that. Oh well, still a really good story. Thanks for a good read.

I really liked the image of the wind tunnel. I've never thought about what blurring actually feels like before, so thought that was a nice touch.

Loved all the stuff about Alec's discomfort at being so close to Max, but we know he's not really sorry.

Oh, and finally:

'Alec was always going to be the same guy, even if he found a way into Max’s heart. Maybe that was why he’d succeed'

Precisely. :)

interesting i liked

aw i love it :)

ariana

Well done. You're awesome at this!

that was a great piece! i really loved it! great job _

Aw.

i love them together.

:D

Usually i prefer when Alec is the one who's sick but your fic is wonderfull. Seeing alec so scared and carring for Max make me melted!

a french lector

just found this and it's wonderful. i especially liked your alec pov, his fear was heartwrenching. also liked the fact that max recognizes she has two good men in front of her, and of course one that's better suited to her ;)

i really liked this stroy.