Reviews for Revelations
Killa Cupcakes chapter 9 . 1/21/2012
You weren't kidding when you said this story was full of angst. It was so angsty, it left a bitter taste in my mouth. I felt so bad for poor Remus. He always gets the shit end of the stick in fics. The way it ended...it seemed to me as though the only reason Sirius wanted to be with him is because he didn't have anyone else left, and there's nothing romantic about that. But that's just my honest opinion. Overall, I think this story was OK, just a bit too heavy on the angst.
The Mills Apocrypha chapter 9 . 8/25/2011
I had to take a few deep breaths on the reunion chapter lol.

What are your thoughts to an inbetween one, during book 4 before this bit? I always wondered about whether they stayed in contact and Moonys thoughts during that time.
W3R3W0LF666 chapter 6 . 8/25/2009
Aw poor Moony - There's something so underlyingly depressing about him having to go through the motions of life.
The Mills Apocrypha chapter 6 . 7/26/2009
So pleased you're finally updating wo! Had to wince where he was remembering the time in the common room, poor poor Moony.
outwittingsquirrels chapter 6 . 7/25/2009
This is really good, can't wait for the next chapter :) It's so sad though, poor Remus
Francesca-Elle chapter 6 . 7/25/2009
HELLO

lovng this story it so good please update more often ;p
rekahneko chapter 5 . 11/19/2008
Wonderfully heartbreaking story...

I love how well you have set up both Remus and Sirius' characters, and how you brought Albus' past into the mix.

Looking forward to more.

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Inky74 chapter 5 . 10/13/2008
Aww poor poor Remus, his life isn't looking good at the moment is it? I just want to give him a hug the poor thing!

Is the next chapter where he realises that Sirius is innocent? I hope so because that will probably be quite a happy moment for him.

I am looking forward to reading more.

-Inky-
The Mills Apocrypha chapter 5 . 10/9/2008
Another high flyer on the tragiometer there! Are you gonna do something with Remus talking to Harry? Praps when Harry mentions Sirius? Looking forward to the next one!
The Mills Apocrypha chapter 4 . 9/18/2008
Its awful, you actually made me cry. It was this bit- “Pray that my closest friend stays locked in that – that place for the rest of his life?” He didnt do it! No, gr how dare he even think its true? His poor broken heart. It if wasnt so well written it wouldnt be nearly so hard to read and tragic. *sobs*
Inky74 chapter 4 . 9/14/2008
In my opinion this was the best chapter so far.

I love that you brought up what Dumbledore had been through too, it is good Remus had someone there to share his greif with.

Poor poor Remus, I am so sad for him.

This chapter was written so well, I can really feel the greif that Remus is going through.

-Inky-
thelongestroads chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
OMFG! *strangles Sirius for the first three chapters* wtf, man! Wth's your problem! That's like freakin' torture. But, I understand Remus not wanting to be away from him... And I'm glad Siri stuck around. And I really do wonder about Dumbledore and Grindlewald(is this his name?)... I mean, really...

Anyways! Wonderful story, and I can't wait to see what you put up next! *dances*
lovefan81 chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
That one was really upsetting and had me crying. You're really into sad and angsty stuff, aren't you?

I'm glad you mentioned Grindelwald.

Now, I'm looking forward to how you will deal with Sirius' escape and how Remus will react.

Unfortunately this chapter made me loose all hope that there will be a happy ending to your story. Nevertheless it's a great one and I don't regret reading it!
remuslives23 chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
"So that’s what this was, Remus thought, heartbreak. His heart had always been slightly broken, cracking more and more as he had watched Sirius flirting with the girls around them and knowing that it could never be him; but now it was shattered and Remus suspected it was beyond repair."

God, that was beautiful and your last line made my eyes well up. I loved this little intimate moment where DD became less of a wizard and more of a man for Remus. Wonderful ficlet. Heartbreaking - as if the unrequainted love ones weren't bad enough!
Gandalf the White Edelweiss chapter 4 . 9/13/2008
*a single tear rolling down my cheek* why must Sirous taunt him like this?
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