I know it’s been a while, but hopefully you write more. I didn’t realize how long’s it been tho until you mentioned Michael jackson dying lol. That was wild, knowing you wrote this story while avatar was still making new episodes and Michael jackson was still alive

NOOOOOOOOOO it has been 10 years since the last update. I truly fathom the day where the story will continue. The end might never come.

Sokka my friend...That... was... beautiful... No really it was, you seriously surprised me author.

It’s just like Zuko losing his fire. She needs to find a new source of drive and needs inner healing

Ok I got to say I love the Taang!

Yeah the characters are a little oc, but this a good start for a less experienced writer. Keep writing and get advice from more experienced writers and you improve immensely. Try to make your characters respond to certain circumstances the way you think they would in the canon. Just make it believable, like if Sokka told a truly funny but not annoying joke Azula might actually laugh. And by the way Azula is far more cunning and refined than what you displayed her as.

Nice story I liked it alot shame it seems its over but would love to see it end nice work anyway

I know the odds of you ever continuing this fic are nearly non-existent, but this was the first Sokka/Azula fic I ever read and what may have started my interest in the pairing. That is why this story has a special place in my memory. If you ever find the inspiration to come back to this, that would be great. Otherwise, thanks for writing what you have.

I know that you aren't going to update this story, but I had read it in 2010 and I am still waiting for you to continue it. It's really amazing and I like the way you write) P.S. Sorry for my English, I'm from Ukraine)

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Sokka, you should have killed ty lee

Sorry about my first review.

But in all my years of fanfiction I have found that there are practically no good 1st person POV stories which are good.
The reason for this is that it is almost impossible to get the character right!

Of all of the thousands of writers on this site perhaps only 10 have done so well.

All the others make their characters vastly OOC.

No offense to your writing that is good and I love the plot of the story but the POV makes it difficult for me to take Sokka seriously and not to view him as a Mary Sue.

Sorry for the harsh words but that is my view.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

NOT A 1ST PERSON POV!

OH THE HORROR!

WTF , When this soon . good story really good , but i hate whne they just stop update !

Pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaazzzzzzzzzz make more chapters like the saszin breaks out of jail and come after them or Azula mai Ty lee join team avatar