Reviews for Sweet Sixteen: The Alternate Version |
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Dyaln chapter 1 . 11/24/2017 She gave Rangiku gave Orihime her first dildo |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2016 this was fun and being the perv that I am, I immediately knew rangiku gave orihime a dildo xD |
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 7/26/2016 this was so funny i got it straight away was so funny i'm guessing Rangiku got her a vibrator or something i never read the original version only this one Rukia, Tatsuki and Rangiku are so dead lol there so mean |
Sleeze chapter 1 . 3/12/2016 Rangiku gave Orihime a stripper outfit. |
LW12 chapter 1 . 1/27/2016 Very good |
XIAN chapter 1 . 12/16/2015 okay i know this 2015 but still this is suprising its amazing |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2015 Because I have no life I liked this version better *starts to cry* |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/23/2015 errr lube? |
adriene.m.marshall chapter 1 . 10/26/2014 Okay. So, I figured out the strawberry joke 5 seconds after Rangiku-sama first said, which is when it first appeared, and Rangiku-sama's present to Orihime-chan is a didlo. |
bruja-esme chapter 1 . 9/30/2014 Loved it ! You my friend are a great writer ! |
MisterEl chapter 1 . 7/1/2014 I literally opened my mouth and put my hand over it when I read the part with Hime finding Ichigo tied to his bed. Great lemon. |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8/2014 She gave her a vibrator |
Luis chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 AMAZING!:) i loved it:3 to me its like orihime and ichigo actually make LOVE not just have "the S word" ›.› haha but anyway i love your ichihime fanfic! keep it up. |
HellYus chapter 1 . 4/22/2012 "She wants a strawberry" Bwahaa! I was laughing so much at that! Amazing story, really! It was a lot of fun to read. :) |
VampireAreej chapter 1 . 9/15/2011 Both are amazing |