Oh wow...

in stark opposition to the last fic of yours I read this one made me cry...

Wonderful job painting the inner turmoil Roy is feeling at Ed's loss. *sniffs*

Touching. Very touching indeed... You made my night a little more sad

;-; These are so sad, but so beautiful! Love 3

ah! sweetest, saddest thing... amazing.

WAH! ;;

Beautifully done. Very sad.

Thanks for posting it.

O damn.

You've got me crying.

Damn.

That's too crual.

So amazing.

*sobs* Could you make this any more depressing? Poor Roy...

wow. wow. I mean really wow. that's all I can say. Dude this is so awesome! gosh, it's so sad, though. Love it anyway, even if it does make me wanna cry.

This story made me cry...

I think it was very well written. You keep the sense of loss troughout the whole story and it has a very strong impact. I feel so bad for poor Roy right now...

But excellent job.

Wow this was really well written and cleaver. Not many fics are written this way and it makes a really nice change! Bravo on such a different yet touching story.

You've done really well to write like this but not allow it to detract at all from the emotional connection to the reader. If anything, with it being written like this, it's enhanced the strong emotions of loss and heartache.

Anyway I'll stop going on about how cool I think the story is and just fav it.

Keep up the GREAT writing!