| Reviews for Capture of the Generals |
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  Tjzoom21 chapter 4 . 6/14/2013 When i read the 'you owe me a bottle' part i started crying and said : Cross... Your a G3NiUS. |
 CrescentSnow chapter 5 . 5/21/2012 oH pLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORYYYY! |
| NekoMataDemon chapter 5 . 1/3/2012 I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story! This is actually my first Cloud and Cross fic I have read...and I'm in lovee! Hahaha! Review for chapter 4: I laughed so hard on the butt thing! Haha! Absolutly admire :)) |
| Rhien Meoita chapter 5 . 6/10/2010 Omg. I love this story. XD it's best thing evah. :) haha. I love the Klaud and Cross couple. so much fun. |
| Ozuchi-Kozuchi chapter 5 . 4/24/2010 This is a great story! I wish I could be more descriptive but...anyway, Bless you for writing pairing, and I love the way you write Klaud! |
| yannn chapter 5 . 4/1/2010 i really liked this the second last line! |
| yannn chapter 1 . 3/30/2010 very interesting and nice! |
| ToastBandits chapter 3 . 11/11/2009 LOL! XD Aw! Cloud and Cross are so cute. 8D And this story is halarious. XD I'll have to thank the Noahs for capturing the generals. Lol! XD |
| Azali Syria chapter 1 . 5/31/2009 XD Sorry to clutter things up, but I had to show my friend this story. Hi there, it's Azi's friend. I am a HUGE CloudXCross fan and this story just takes the cake in many I have read. And that doesn't include the other one you've written, as I haven't had the chance to stop laughing at how you ended this one. I'm impressed at how perfect your characterization is for Cloud and Cross, it's almost like I can see this being an actual episode. That would be epic. So thank you for showing writers out there how it's done. |
| Azali Syria chapter 5 . 5/31/2009 I know you wrote this like...last year, but I'm slow in finding fanfiction. Omgaara, I laughed so hard for this, you got Cross down perfectly. So bravo to you, it's definitely the best CrossXCloud story I've ever read. |
| Wind In Your Whiskers chapter 5 . 4/26/2009 Homicidal ape. LoL. x) |
| crazy queen of toast chapter 5 . 3/8/2009 That was... WONDERFUL! Great story! |
| himitsuuu chapter 5 . 12/29/2008 gah! i wanna read the next one! i hate suspense! |
| Firearm-Alchemist chapter 5 . 12/15/2008 lol. homicidal ape... This chap was more of connector kind of thingy rite? well at least that's what i think. Waitin for the next chap! Oh and u a royai fan? |
| Kazuki-kun is an A and an A chapter 5 . 12/3/2008 HAHA! XD Ah this was great! XDD I love the homicidal monkey thing. Hilarious. -Kazuki |
