Hehehe 3 love this!

Please, please, please update

what lovely lemon, though i would have prefered if naruto was more uke and less seme, naruto just dosent fit the role of seme

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Where's the next chapter?

I'm clicking around and it's NOT COMING UP!

Please update *sniff*

‘No one knows,’ Kiba said, narrowing his eyes mysteriously. ‘Some say it’s because the only love of his life jilted him there.’ Naruto’s heart clenched painfully in his chest. ‘Others think he just doesn’t like being social."

That made me laugh.

Pretty amusing that it took getting drunk (well at least Naruto) in order for them to get together.

It's funny how open Naruto is about being bi, but it's hard to imagine him being different than that. He's the "Don't like it? Well too bad asshole!" type.

I'm curious if Sasuke is in the closet though, it sure seems like it. I'd imagine he'd be so since he's a privet person.

I was impressed that you didn't make it so Naruto got on the team. It'd be a bit of character-favoritism if he did.

Man Sasuke sure got ballsy with Naruto all of a sudden. About time! Haha. Interesting how he starts super confident, but freaks himself out by thinking to much.

'Most of his day was spent worrying that the dobe would approach him and firmly tell him that he didn’t want to be taught by a cold ice-princess bastard like Sasuke.'

Sasuke's confidence level sure goes up and down doesn't it? What a teenager haha.

The broom scene was simply adorable. It was well written, I could imagine it well. Naruto has a little crush, but man does Sasuke have the lovebug real bad. How endearing. I like the idea of Sasuke having a huge crush on someone because that puts him in a position he's not used to. That's fun to to do characters.

Random thought, I always thought brooms looked super uncomfortable, especially for the guys.

The leaning in for a kiss part was cute. : ]

Finding out that Sasuke is the black sheep (or was since they're all dead) is interesting. I'm really curious how Sasuke's family died in this story since it clearly wasn't from Itachi.

I like how you had Itachi be the DADA teacher, keeps things interesting.

I didn't know that ' was used instead of " in some places. I'm getting used to it pretty quickly.

I like the humor in the fic. It's subtle enough to make it not seem out of place, but still puts a grin on my face.

"I’ll make sure he crawls right into my eagerly waiting arms."

Creepy much Sasuke? Haha.

Didn't like that the Hat sang about Naruto and Sasuke. Just me though.

Curious how Sasuke ended up in Gryffindor. Well he is brave. Pretty stubborn and passionate about some things (seems to be a Gryffindor trait) Many people see him as a Slythrin because of the ambitious strive for power aspect. But I guess since in this fic he doesn't need to be overly ambitious to kill his brother. I always thought he'd fit well in Ravenclaw 'cause of the "intelligence and cleverness" thing. Any could work really, it all depends on how you interpret his character. Although I do think Hufflepuff would be a bit of a stretch for him. Haha.

As for Naruto... well yeah Gryffindor is pretty much a given.

Man it took me forever to find a fic like this. Naruto in Harry Potter world. All of them had him as a ninja in Harry Potter universe, which seemed rather stupid.

"6XWinner of Wizard Weekly’s Most Charming Body Award"

...haha! Thats funny.

Also you should use " not ' for when people talk.

ZOH EM GE! I LURV THIS! XD Great job!

Kimimaro Bones? I laughed on that one. lolz

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awesome story! i love how you made naruto. a lot o people make him sound all girly, and you didn't! lol. anywayz, awesome story. 9/10

I really like your story expecially your last chapter o.- I had a fun time reading it. I hope you had a good Christmas and a Happy New Year. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

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Hana Kogane

Great chapter! I'm so happy they're together. I can't wait to read more!