Reviews for Unjust Fear
Violet chapter 24 . 4/20
I am upset you have chosen not to update. However I respect and can understand your wishes! Hope you one day decide to come finish this story of! thank you
Hannah M. Malfoy chapter 24 . 4/10
Hello, I'm the nineteen years-old girl from South Korea, who have recently fell in love with Harry Potter series. (Please excuse my grammatical errors since I'm not accustomed to use English fluently)
I really have enjoyed your story from the very start, and I'd like to ask you for a favor.
May I translate the story in Korean to share the other Harry Potter fans in Korea?
I swear that I'll never change the context or steal your story from you.
Also, I'll present your name and this site on the very top of the translated story.
Thanks for your understanding:)
Dragonheart24 chapter 24 . 3/21
Please update
Hayoen chapter 24 . 3/16
Yep... so I just binge-read everything over 3 days. It would've taken me less time but I went slow to take everything in and kept re-reading the especially tender parts between Severus and Harry, and honestly I am totally in love with this story. I know it's been a loooooooooooong time since you updated (5 years, in fact) but it would be nice to see a chapter 25? No rush/pressure though :))

Good job on this story!
Hayoen chapter 20 . 3/16
why are there so many [!] scattered in the middle of sentences?
Guest chapter 24 . 2/19
Hey! I am really enjoying this story! I hope you finished your masters degree and that you come back to this story one day!
sinetrum chapter 1 . 1/17
you know what? I almost cry river and this is only chapter one
Tatum Grimes chapter 24 . 8/25/2019
please update soon this is really good and i would love to read more.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/21/2019
harry potter's aunt and uncle and cousin are the worst ever they do not care for him at all.
YamiYugiYuki chapter 2 . 5/17/2019
Ah, I love this story is so well written. I only found it again because I had mentioned it in one of my diary entires. So glad I did. This is a wonderful story and one I very much enjoy. Well done :)
excessivelyperky chapter 24 . 5/16/2019
Oh, I think that Severus will have some help from the Dragon, Molly, in disemboweling Fudge if that Minister gets too far with his suit for custody of Harry.

Perhaps it's just as well the Muggle authorities get the Dursleys (one can imagine what either Snape or Molly would do to them, and hey).
mumphie chapter 24 . 2/11/2019
OMG! the last line is great.
I know that 'real life' can be time consuming! You started on your Master's and three and a half years later you have even more 'real life' going on, I am sure. I only hope that you can come back to this story. You write well and weave a fantastic story. At this point, there are so many cliffs to fall off of...please consider this story again. :)
mumphie chapter 21 . 2/11/2019
I am enjoying your story. But, I am worried that there are only three chapters left and you haven't posted since 2015. sigh.

Just something to think on -
then/than
borrow/burrow
mumphie chapter 17 . 2/10/2019
It's time like these (having the Dark Lord incapacitated) where I always want Amelia and Croaker to be contacted and a secret meeting to happen where Quirrelmort gets tossed through the veil - all WITHOUT Fudge in the know! Perhaps giving him the Draught of Living Death THEN toss him through the veil. With Fudge there, I am worried!
mumphie chapter 9 . 2/8/2019
Your story is moving along really well. In the beginning I wanted to strangle snape, but I like how you have had him grow.

"...it is strange to recall the image of the perfect gentleman..." - recall, not recoil
"...cowering in my shoes..." not covering
Just curious - what is the symbol (!) that keeps showing up? Is it just an issue with the ff site? Or, is it supposed to be something else?
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