I enjoyed following you on your journey. There were a lot more changes than I expected. Some were not easy to accept. However, on the whole you crafted an excellent story that I'm glad I found. I love the ending!

I loved your story of Edward's view. Thank you for writing.

Always love a happy ending, and this is one of the best!

Pretty good description of the ordeal Bella and Edward went through to have their baby !

I'm puzzled at this chapter, because you already covered the discovery of the baby's voice in a previous chapter! Oh well, it was quite well done, both times!

That right there was one of the sweetest moments in the whole story, and nearly caused me tears, when reading the book, and watching the movie!

This was always my favorite part of the dialogue during Bella's pregnancy, because it saved her from starvation, grossed out Jacob and gave Edward some small spark of hope!

How can those two things exist side by side, that loathing of his self, transferred to the child he fathered, and the love for his wife, expressed by his willingness to share her with Jake? Talk about bi-polar, Edward Cullen has to be the poster child at this moment!

Good old Edward, first thought isn't how miraculous this would be, but how evil any issue of his would just have to be! Makes you want to smack the back of his head, like Rose does with Emmett! Now he 's going to scare Bella by demanding she get rid of this hideous thing inside her!

Now you're using your powers, Bella! Edward finally got smart, too!

Though I disagree with his thinking, they are his opinions and who are we to tell him they are wrong? The thing that really ticks me off is his refusal to consider Bella's side of this disagreement! That aside, his memories of the wedding were sweet.

Poor, self-flagellating Edward! He can never just accept that human skin shows bruises, unlike his skin! It's a part of life and not a sign of his being a monster! Does he not realize most husbands have left a mark on their wife in the course of making passionate love with her?

Very nicely started out, just the right touch, I'm thinking!

Keep going!

Great story!