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Fred's fanatic chapter 8 . 7/9/2018 Scorpius has won me over by mentioning his love of Literature I'm a proud bibliophile and there did need To be a literature class at hog warts but he will win He just needs hermiones help .but he and rose make All their friends believe in love imagine a malfoy and A weasley witch falling in love let alone Draco mellowing my favourite weasels died but this generation Have brought my smile back they're so outgoing and Full of life yet drama follows them plus it's definitely Exciting to see that love really is more powerful than Hate tough luck voldy you lose .you really are another Magician similar to jk as no ones perfect and both of You have captured that brilliantly yet with compassion But that's why the potter franchise works and your Going to do wonderfully well at whatever you choose But please do keep writing some fan fiction on the side You're an incredibly creative unforgettably genius at Writing this genre everything's utterly well written so Thank you very much I love Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 7 . 7/9/2018 I'm loving the fact that now they can choose the house To go into yet remain friends that is sensational as is Albus he seems to be both confident yet uncertain in an Endearing way though it wouldn't be smart to get on his Wrong side and his sibling rivalry is rather cute as if Anyone hurts James they will pay plus everyone is One of a kind though a dog with green eyes how extra Ordinary albus reminds me of regulus black as still Waters run deep so it pays not to under estimate him But people will it's the quiet ones that make their mark But every description is so very deep thoughtful yet With such empath coming through its obvious that you Love the potter universe it's such a spell binding feeling I'll have it forever but it's amazing to see such precise Mesmerising beautiful intuitive wacky insights but I'm Not surprised as you have an incredible gift that I Hope to see in a complete fan fiction over any one of These characters very soon trust me I'm a potter head Of over twenty years you can do it I'm hooked so Please consider it and thank you so very Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 6 . 7/9/2018 To be honest James is very lucky he's Harry's son as he Has so many quirky qualities that make him interesting Yet uniquely himself plus he also shares weasley traits Such as the undying love of his family although I do Hope that Theresa looks like her mother and has her Brains but she has great taste in wizards he's a catch. Unicorns are cool in the magical world and only the pure Of heart can see them though young men might use the Term journals they're so picky and most witches loved Oliver wood but his love for his daughter stands out he Truly is one exceptional father whom will make sure she Will never be hurt from anyone he will kill them if they Try to good for him and thank you for including kreacher He always loved his master regulus black .youre absolutely magnificent at these wonderful highly Informative colourful much loved insights to this new Generation but with only four to go I'm feeling that You should try your hand at writing some great fan Fiction concerning some of these characters you'd be A massive success and I'd read every one as they need A voice plus your love for Harry potters world glistens Like pure gold so please do consider this request and Thank you so very Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 5 . 7/8/2018 Dominique is just thoroughly adorable and loving France Is normal in any world at all and doing that to victoire Wasn't cricket but that's the curse of redheads act now Regret it sounds fascinating in fact perfect For only thing that hog warts should've done More often is have more dances there it's a great Stress relief also plus it could've broken down barriers. Most of the Weasley children could go to either Beaubaxtons or hog warts but hating the Color orange Is understandable these young witches and wizards are Going to outshine their relatives and parents with their Blessings while finding their adventures along the way Never losing the friends they made but you truly do Have an astonishing knack for story telling of the Highest degree not many people can say that jk would Love how you've vividly described these intriguing Youngsters so thank you so very much for this Magical Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 4 . 7/8/2018 I'm in complete agreement with Roxane over her Layabout mother she was a washout as a witch and Not good enough for George weasley in any way as The rest would she doesn't need the trademark red hair to be a powerful weasley she's Dangerous in other ways I love her she's delightfully Sassy plus protective and they need more singers as Different jobs will be needed I can't knit but it shouldn't Matter to her but you've written every one with so much Love and great creativity it's totally outstandingly brilliant that these characters have been brought to life So thank you so very much,hopefully jk will bring them On to the big screen some time Elizabeth Skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 3 . 7/8/2018 It would've taken Molly a long time to come to terms That her son Fred was dead but this Fred silently stole Her heart I'm positive about that how could she not Love he has dark hair instead of red it sets him Apart plus merlin had dark hair and redheads don't always have freckles and George probably knows he Doesn't want to inherit it .all in all Fred's an original Exactly what he should be he's the most brilliant yet Thoughtful quirkiest prankster around whom has the Weight of the world on his shoulders but his late Uncle Fred would be very proud of him and tell him To follow his dreams I'd I'd love to read anything you Write about his life at hog warts as you have such an Exciting way of bringing these magical teenagers to Life so thank you so very much I love this character. Love Elizabeth skinner. |
Fred's fanatic chapter 2 . 7/8/2018 She sounds like a typical teenage girl with the usual Problems except she's magical though having red gold Hair and being in ravenclaw is fantastic as victories hair Is gryffindors colours congratulations on uniting two Houses in one sounds interesting yet Victories has veela qualities that are subtle not flashy Similar to her mum and hermione is the most wonderful Role no one knows whom they will fall in Love with that's what teenage years are for victoire Sounds thoroughly beautiful and really modest while Being a trifle mean but she clearly adores her family All of them and the weasleys were always my favourite Family from Harry potters magical world they were poor But rich through their love for each other so thank you Very much for your highly creative facts on these Lovely people .elizabeth skinner. |
ImLostForever chapter 20 . 8/2/2017 Wow. That's all I can say. Just wow. The Lysander chapter killed me. |
Knutforyourthoughts chapter 20 . 1/28/2015 Awww, this was really good! Some of the twists were heartbreaking and I'm actually attached to your version of these characters. |
alamodie chapter 20 . 10/13/2013 Wow, amazing! Some of the chapters actually shocked me, like I just stopped for a moment. So cool! |
littledrummergirl257 chapter 20 . 2/5/2013 With as many of these 10 things stories that I've read, I'm surprised I didn't run into this one sooner. I really enjoyed it. You had some really cool ideas that I haven't seen before that kept me really interested in the whole thing. I enjoyed the extra characters you included as well. So many people just do the canon next generation characters and don't include anyone else, so thank you! :) |
mgp0701 chapter 14 . 5/19/2012 This portrays to me perfectly how life can be so unjust. And it's so realistic. Not everyone can live, and people don't lead perfect lives. I am so glad you made this story. It helps shed light on characters that are in the 2nd generation, even if it is from the authors perspective. It really gives them life, and a back story to build upon. Perfection. |
arulent chapter 19 . 10/9/2011 So these are somewhat fantastic. Utterly fantastic :D |
Hyha chapter 1 . 9/10/2011 Read this over for the thousandth time and just wanted you to know that it never gets old. You did a wonderful job bringing these characters to life. |
I'mMrRecklessWithACapitalR chapter 14 . 8/26/2011 Noooooooooo! Lily, dead.:'( |