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Fred's fanatic chapter 8 . 7/9/2018
Scorpius has won me over by mentioning his love of
Literature I'm a proud bibliophile and there did need
To be a literature class at hog warts but he will win
He just needs hermiones help .but he and rose make
All their friends believe in love imagine a malfoy and
A weasley witch falling in love let alone Draco mellowing
my favourite weasels died but this generation
Have brought my smile back they're so outgoing and
Full of life yet drama follows them plus it's definitely
Exciting to see that love really is more powerful than
Hate tough luck voldy you lose .you really are another
Magician similar to jk as no ones perfect and both of
You have captured that brilliantly yet with compassion
But that's why the potter franchise works and your
Going to do wonderfully well at whatever you choose
But please do keep writing some fan fiction on the side
You're an incredibly creative unforgettably genius at
Writing this genre everything's utterly well written so
Thank you very much I love Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 7 . 7/9/2018
I'm loving the fact that now they can choose the house
To go into yet remain friends that is sensational as is
Albus he seems to be both confident yet uncertain in an
Endearing way though it wouldn't be smart to get on his
Wrong side and his sibling rivalry is rather cute as if
Anyone hurts James they will pay plus everyone is
One of a kind though a dog with green eyes how extra
Ordinary albus reminds me of regulus black as still
Waters run deep so it pays not to under estimate him
But people will it's the quiet ones that make their mark
But every description is so very deep thoughtful yet
With such empath coming through its obvious that you
Love the potter universe it's such a spell binding feeling
I'll have it forever but it's amazing to see such precise
Mesmerising beautiful intuitive wacky insights but I'm
Not surprised as you have an incredible gift that I
Hope to see in a complete fan fiction over any one of
These characters very soon trust me I'm a potter head
Of over twenty years you can do it I'm hooked so
Please consider it and thank you so very
Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 6 . 7/9/2018
To be honest James is very lucky he's Harry's son as he
Has so many quirky qualities that make him interesting
Yet uniquely himself plus he also shares weasley traits
Such as the undying love of his family although I do
Hope that Theresa looks like her mother and has her
Brains but she has great taste in wizards he's a catch.
Unicorns are cool in the magical world and only the pure
Of heart can see them though young men might use the
Term journals they're so picky and most witches loved
Oliver wood but his love for his daughter stands out he
Truly is one exceptional father whom will make sure she
Will never be hurt from anyone he will kill them if they
Try to good for him and thank you for including kreacher
He always loved his master regulus black .youre absolutely magnificent at these wonderful highly
Informative colourful much loved insights to this new
Generation but with only four to go I'm feeling that
You should try your hand at writing some great fan
Fiction concerning some of these characters you'd be
A massive success and I'd read every one as they need
A voice plus your love for Harry potters world glistens
Like pure gold so please do consider this request and
Thank you so very Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 5 . 7/8/2018
Dominique is just thoroughly adorable and loving France
Is normal in any world at all and doing that to victoire
Wasn't cricket but that's the curse of redheads act now
Regret it sounds fascinating in fact perfect
For only thing that hog warts should've done
More often is have more dances there it's a great
Stress relief also plus it could've broken down barriers.
Most of the Weasley children could go to either
Beaubaxtons or hog warts but hating the Color orange
Is understandable these young witches and wizards are
Going to outshine their relatives and parents with their
Blessings while finding their adventures along the way
Never losing the friends they made but you truly do
Have an astonishing knack for story telling of the
Highest degree not many people can say that jk would
Love how you've vividly described these intriguing
Youngsters so thank you so very much for this
Magical Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 4 . 7/8/2018
I'm in complete agreement with Roxane over her
Layabout mother she was a washout as a witch and
Not good enough for George weasley in any way as
The rest would she doesn't need the trademark red hair to be a powerful weasley she's
Dangerous in other ways I love her she's delightfully
Sassy plus protective and they need more singers as
Different jobs will be needed I can't knit but it shouldn't
Matter to her but you've written every one with so much
Love and great creativity it's totally outstandingly brilliant that these characters have been brought to life
So thank you so very much,hopefully jk will bring them
On to the big screen some time Elizabeth
Skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 3 . 7/8/2018
It would've taken Molly a long time to come to terms
That her son Fred was dead but this Fred silently stole
Her heart I'm positive about that how could she not
Love he has dark hair instead of red it sets him
Apart plus merlin had dark hair and redheads don't always have freckles and George probably knows he
Doesn't want to inherit it .all in all Fred's an original
Exactly what he should be he's the most brilliant yet
Thoughtful quirkiest prankster around whom has the
Weight of the world on his shoulders but his late
Uncle Fred would be very proud of him and tell him
To follow his dreams I'd I'd love to read anything you
Write about his life at hog warts as you have such an
Exciting way of bringing these magical teenagers to
Life so thank you so very much I love this character.
Love Elizabeth skinner.
Fred's fanatic chapter 2 . 7/8/2018
She sounds like a typical teenage girl with the usual
Problems except she's magical though having red gold
Hair and being in ravenclaw is fantastic as victories hair
Is gryffindors colours congratulations on uniting two
Houses in one sounds interesting yet
Victories has veela qualities that are subtle not flashy
Similar to her mum and hermione is the most wonderful
Role no one knows whom they will fall in
Love with that's what teenage years are for victoire
Sounds thoroughly beautiful and really modest while
Being a trifle mean but she clearly adores her family
All of them and the weasleys were always my favourite
Family from Harry potters magical world they were poor
But rich through their love for each other so thank you
Very much for your highly creative facts on these
Lovely people .elizabeth skinner.
ImLostForever chapter 20 . 8/2/2017
Wow. That's all I can say. Just wow. The Lysander chapter killed me.
Knutforyourthoughts chapter 20 . 1/28/2015
Awww, this was really good! Some of the twists were heartbreaking and I'm actually attached to your version of these characters.
alamodie chapter 20 . 10/13/2013
Wow, amazing! Some of the chapters actually shocked me, like I just stopped for a moment. So cool!
littledrummergirl257 chapter 20 . 2/5/2013
With as many of these 10 things stories that I've read, I'm surprised I didn't run into this one sooner. I really enjoyed it. You had some really cool ideas that I haven't seen before that kept me really interested in the whole thing. I enjoyed the extra characters you included as well. So many people just do the canon next generation characters and don't include anyone else, so thank you! :)
mgp0701 chapter 14 . 5/19/2012
This portrays to me perfectly how life can be so unjust. And it's so realistic. Not everyone can live, and people don't lead perfect lives. I am so glad you made this story. It helps shed light on characters that are in the 2nd generation, even if it is from the authors perspective. It really gives them life, and a back story to build upon. Perfection.
arulent chapter 19 . 10/9/2011
So these are somewhat fantastic. Utterly fantastic :D
Hyha chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Read this over for the thousandth time and just wanted you to know that it never gets old. You did a wonderful job bringing these characters to life.
I'mMrRecklessWithACapitalR chapter 14 . 8/26/2011
Noooooooooo! Lily, dead.:'(
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