This is the first well written fanfic I've read in a long time, very well thought out. I'm thoroughly impressed with this. I will definitely follow and read more.

WOW! I love how you included chaos into the story.

Best vincent x sephiroth story ive read so far.!

Great job. I'll admit, there were a few times I couldn't see Sephiroth saying one thing or another, but overall this flowed very nicely. Loved it. I also loved how you had the Chaos dialogue with Vincent's pleas interspersed; very original.

If you haven't written a sequel yet, DO IT!

I absolutely loved it! o

it was sooo hawt *q*

Hmm, not bad. Though, I did find Sephiroth to be a little childish at times (not as a child), but it was more like a gleeful kind of childish. They were both kinda OOC, but that doesn't really bother me. At least it was all consensual in the end. It looked like there was going to be rape for a bit. Not that I would have really minded. All in all, this was pretty good. I wish you luck in your writing, if you continue to do so, I mean.

With big hearts and exploding bits of love,

Keade

I do hope you write a sequel to this...especially if you put a jealous Cloud in it. I'm normally NOT a Final Fantasy reader (my aniki got me started on it with Ookami Kasumi's fic DIABOLIC), but this story seems to be pretty much above the norm when it comes to fanfic writing (though DIABOLIC is still better...it's in a league of its own...sorry!). I hope the sequel comes up sometime.

~BeyondBirthday93

This is one of the most amazing stories i have had the pleasure of reading! and i will admit this is my thrid time reading it . I would be so elated if you made a sequel!

Awaiting eagerly for it to continue!

I love it! I'm totally adding it to my favorites! I hope you make a sequel!

Aww. What a sweet and steamy story! Man, this was beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it! Submissive Vincent is just adorable! Great job with this! 3

This was perfect. Loved the intensity of their mating and the way Sephiroth dealt with Chaos was priceless. Fantastic to see Vincent getting some serious loving. I'd love to see a sequel to this. Vincent's friends reations would be great to read. Hope you do another. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Even though I'm not a big fan of Vincent being gay this was very good and please make a sequel!

Well written story, I love how you make Sephy to be just so... Sephy. Perfectly logical, yet twisted and strong-willed. "If I want something, I get it"-attitude. I'd love to see a sequel for this, and maybe at some point the same story in poor Vince's PoV? What he thinks, his view of the past and all that. Anyways. Lovely story, yesyes. Two thumps up and a bookmark XD Keep up the awesome work!

Wow, that was fantastic, beautifull written and awesome yaoi. The fighting scenes were amazing. Great job.

XD That was really good! Such intensity! It was wonderful! I think it's really great that you were able to fit this all in a one shot.

I think it'd be cool if you made a sequel, it would be interesting to read.

Keep up the great work. :3

Wow, intense one of the best yaois EVA!