A virgin? Yawnnnnnnnn

I loved it!

He just did a fuck and duck. Seriously!

The fact that Edward is forgiven for being a whore, yet the cliched sluts he gets with aren't is an embarrassment to you as the writer.
Shame on you.

So now she gets a used up STD riddle skank, and he gets the knowledge that he is the only one to ever go there?
Nice, and very equal of course!
Ridiculous garbage.

He's a manwhore because idiots think it's Ok for a guy to be, but not a girl, she must be a virgin to deserve him. Makes me ashamed of my gender.

Usual virgin sent to teach the manslut the error of his skanky ways! How original! Yawn.

Aww.. That was so sweet. I really liked your fic. It was different from others I've read about Edward and Bella being best friends and becoming lovers. I think yours make more sense. Its really hard to figure our that you are in love with your best friend because you already love them. But it sucks when he doesn't return the feeling. When I told my best friend that I am in love with him he loughed his ass of
And when he figured I wasn't joking he told me I was always like a big sister to him. Big sister! It was just so painful. I wish I never told him because he acks so weird around me. Enough with the sulking anyway you did a really good job. I can't believe I didn't read it before. Great fic.

Great story loved it! Thanks for sharing!

Oh god, didn't she pee in the forest ?! Nastyy if she did before playing doctor with loverboy

Great story. Loved it!

Whales are so damn scary!

Finally!

He did exactly what he said other guys would do, he promised her a good time with sweet words and in the end fucked her and left :(

:D