You should not apologize for the length of this! It's great. I was wondering about the college thing...if she was gonna end up going to Chicago or something.

I really liked this story! A lot of one-shots with sex in them either start with an established relationship or don't have that love aspect to them, but you managed to build the whole relationship and love and still make it a short read. Well done!

Ok, this confuses me... So she met a dude and told Edward about him... Then Edward starts distancing himself from her... She doesn't notice that?

Then she says she wanted her first time to be with him? Yet she started a relationship with another dude? She liked Edward and thought it would be a good idea to tell Edward about him? And then doesn't notice Edward's change in behaviour at learning that?

You ruined the one shot adding needless drama like that.

Lovely and wonderful! A sequel please?

love it..

:)*

That was awesome! TTFN! JXB :-}

Love teacherward 3

I really loved this story! You should do a sequal about their life after this, and them telling the parents and all!

This was wonderful! I love how they were so shy, but couldn't stay away from each other, but still kept things teacher/student mostly until after graduation.

you are awesome ;)

Amazing!

You should make this a full story!

loved it !

Excellent history!

I am charmed with the lemon!

Oh I have every intention of reading A Twist of Fate but I wanted to read your o/shots first. I really like all inclusive stories that are one shots. I really, Really like your one shots, they're great!