Great chapter

Yay, happy ending

Wow. although I can’t tell if this is a vampire flic, I don’t really care for them

I really liked it, a different vamp story. Nice job :)

I hate the be a critical because it's a good story but you spelled Motoki wrong.

Hrm... kinda felt like you were pushing hard to work some of those details in. For example, describing that "she looked at him like she had never told him her name!" It's ok to wait on these sorts of details and work them in later when you are developing interpersonal relationships between the characters. Then people can see that Usagi has no idea who this person is or how he knows her name. Just wanted to add, glad to see that you finished the fic. Some authors step away so long that they just never come back to it. Commendable when they do :)

Good story. I like it.

Just read the entire story and I must say that I loved it! I'm so glad that you finished writing it.

really good story

Am so happy you finally had a ending to this story. It was worth the wait I love it!

This story was amazing and I enjoyed it.

Its oveer!

whoa, it's a little harsh calling someone stupid. Anyway if it's not supposed to be Diamond, is this character one of your own creation? (Don't yell at me ') I've never heard of him. It's a very interesting story.

should finish

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