I thought this was complete?

A great story, but I don't like the sequel from the preview.

That scene where Hermione felt hurt for being suspected of being a Death Eater instantly killed my sympathy for her. What, she can suspect others but when a foreign stranger does it it's a grave insult? What an *sshole! You haven't done her any favors with that characterization. I don't like this Hermione.

Do you ever continue

Great job

I'm going to be honest. I loved the story, honestly. The writing was good, the plot well executed, and is definitely one of the top stories I've read from a well-written, competent individual so cutoz to you. My only complaint, as a reader, which you can totally ignore I just need to rant, is Hermionie. Dear God. I wanted to slap her the entire time. Dear. God. Could she be anymore useless? Where is my heroin I know and love? This girl can seem to only do two things; hit harry and cry. Oh, and also scream. Your parents are dead. Got it. Saw them murdered. Tragic. Oh no. Not like anyone else around you is also in the same boat. I'm not dissing her feelings but damn. She just keeps breaking down, losing her mind and trying to break up with Harry over him 'being in danger' like I get the semantics, but she, I mean, I can't even explain it. There are so many little and big things. I just really hate her defeatist attitude. The moment something gets hard she doesn't contribute, wanting to run into battle like a headless chicken the moment he's in a duel. Like, I get it. Honestly. The want to protect a loved one and him being in real time danger, but wheres her head? Why isn't she being productive. IDK. I know why, as a writer you wrote this, but I guess my rant is on the writing style. I hate it lol, but you wrote it perfectly, hense my hate lol. It's not you, I love the story. Its the character. Like, if I hated SUPER!Harry fics, and someone wrote a really well executed fic displaying all the characteristics of a SUPER!Harry, the writing could be phenomenal, which yours is, and I would still hate his character. Like, some characters are written specifically so we can hate them, and there are those that instantly set certain people off. She is that to me See? Just needed to rant lol. Love the story, but that chick made me want to rip my hair out or b**** slap her. ANYWAY, rant aside, ignore my ramblings and know I liked it lol. Good job!

If its up to me ill kill and hunt every ministry employer and pure blood wizenmagot leaders

semi auto only fire 1 shot per pull. Full auto fires multiple rounds per pull, and is activated with the same charge lever that turns on the safety. Glocks are also only semi auto. Don't worry. This is a common mistake.

How much do you actually know about semi-automatic pistols? From the way you wrote “James” explaining the pistol, it seems you were implying ‘semi-auto’ might be full auto. Coming from a long line of farmers on both sides, I have been handling weapons for over 60 years. I actually prefer semi-auto over full auto. I was taught to aim at what I shoot at rather than ‘spraying’ an area.

JimS

...good ideas, definitely. But it's not fun when you feel like you're slapped in the face with them over and over again and the scenes just flash by before you can figure out what the hell is going on.

How have I missed this story? I'm pumped to read the rest!

Slow down a little, people normally like some small talk before speaking about their traumatic experiences. Also, seriously? She actually cried because he did the same thing to her that she did to him? How self-centered, does this hypocrite actually think she can't be doubted even by people who've never met her before? Apparently checking someone's arm is justified enough that she did it to a total stranger, so why shouldn't she have expected the same treatment in return.

I kind of hate your Hermione now. Chapter one and already she needs some redemption to be anything but an a**hole in my mind.

Man, this was...
I never could have possibly guessed that Harry potter and The Punisher could be crossed over, especially like this. I loved it. This is easily one of my favorite fanfictions of all time. Fantastic work!

Excellent story!

I looked up Hybrid Theory to read it, but I couldn't find it