Reviews for Water Shade
Lily chapter 1 . 4/27/2018
I love SuiSasu
Ninja-edit chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
Such a wonderful story! I'm not kidding *-*

Sui & Sasu were just so IC. And the tension, the atmosphere, the conversation, geez blame my bad english I can't find any other words to describe how I love it.

I read your SuiSasu fics on a row, I love them all, and this one is my fav. I'd love to think it's a missing scene in someplace at the manga/anime. It seemed so real for me.. .

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'He'll take you back. He should.'

I felt a pang in my heart reading that line. Suigetsu is kind of happy-go-lucky and my-pace person. I believe he can say everything he wants to say without hesitation nor fear. But somehow I felt he was stupid, beautifully naive, when he let the line out. He was so nice my heart felt hurt. :'

It's nice you made such a (kinda) happy ending. Yes, Sasu has got enough depressing things to think about in his life. Quit the emo-ing, now is time for Suigetsu with his cheerful yet mature show.. :D

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Erm, I'm sorry if my english is weird T.T

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Wish for another SuiSasu from you.. :)
Lord Axxingtons chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
Alright. Alright, and this is entirely your fault. You've actually, personally ALTERED my top 3 OTPs, something that hasn't happened in over a year - in one evening. It's ridiculous.

It used to go MattxMello, GinIzu, LightL but thanks to you, SuiSasu is actually beating LightL now. I hope you're happy. :(

No, seriously. I love it.
Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 1/23/2009
Haha. Squillionth. That's my new fav word xD

Anyways, this was utterly adorable! -squees- I love this pairing! Oh, I love how you emphasized how hard it actually is to take a person's life. Human's lives are so fragile, so easy to end, but to actually make yourself take away a person's memories and their chance to make more, and to take away a mother from a child, or vice versa, THAT is hard. I tried doing that in a recent fic, but it crashed and burned compared to what you did! Awesome job, keep it up!

These were very good similes:

Ripples lapped against the mossy bank like a tentative child reaching for a delicate toy.

Blood blossomed on his shirt like a flower on fast forward

Haha this was funny:

“My sole purpose in life is not to irritate you,” Suigetsu pouted, sitting down next to the Uchiha, “It’s to get into bed with you.”
YoungSasuke chapter 1 . 10/9/2008
I love the interaction between these two guys. Nice job on this!
Bubba chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Your SuiSasu fics are great! This one was surprisingly deep, and you're one of the few people who didn't put Sasuke and Naruto as "". I'd love to see a multi-chap SuiSase by you, if you still like this pairing in the future.
Lixie Lorn chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
(Facepalms)

This pairing again? Cute though...

~General Everin Stormclaw of the Emerald Stars, Dragon Prince and the Fifth Sutakage, Bearer of the Prophecy, out.