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Adoro essas lembranças fofas deles

A beautiful story and very well written!

Good.

I loved the last paragraph. I love how it keeps Marion & Indy together. I thought this was a great story. Thanks!

That last line just totally melted me.

Brilliant! This is really good and you're amazing at writing for Indy. I've had the kind of mental green room thing too! Could you do me a favour please? And read my eternal sunset story? It's om if you don't like it!

Beth

That was really really good!

Thank you for the heads up on the posting of this new one. :) I was all over it though, and I did read it yesterday although sadly I didn't have time to review. (Now I do!)

It is no surprise (but rather an immense delight) that this is another gem from you. You have made Indy more than a legend - he is really believable as a flesh-and-blood man, although still a remarkable one as even his impeccable academic history shows. With every turn of your writing, it's like you're reading minds: it feels like you're reading mine, because with each turn of your writing, it feels perfectly worked from a standpoint of insight; the creators' minds, because you handle so carefully what they have given birth to; Indy's, because you pen him, I believe, exactly as he would have acted, felt and thought. I am also really excited to have seen what you did with Ox, a character whose strange mental situation gave us only teasers of his real personality in the latest filmed incarnation.

I think you fill a void within this community wonderfully. It is the tendency of Indy writers to set out wanting to write the quintessential "NEXT ADVENTURE" with all its to-do and plot complexity. You have done something refreshing and completely different - giving us tidbits that really focus on Indy's most personal facets: his hopes, his fears, his loves, his closely examined life. You make him feel like a close, very tangible friend.

I have proved I can ramble on forever. But really, thank you. :)

Best Regards,

_Indus Belethil_

So sweet!That was amazing!

I do not know what to say other than this is absolutely magnificent. You capture the characters perfectly. Absolutely beautiful story. I look forward to reading more of your work.