Reviews for What's He Done To You? |
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Sarah chapter 9 . 12/4/2016 If there's anything Tommy Oliver don't do are rape, sexual assault or harassment, or abuse. |
Sarah chapter 9 . 12/4/2016 If there's anything Tommy Oliver don't do are rape, sexual assault or harassment, or abuse. He is such a saint, Kira might as well call him dad. |
ConfidentialAuthor chapter 1 . 6/23/2015 That is just cold Mrs. Ford |
FinalFantasyCrazedGirl01 chapter 9 . 5/13/2014 UPDAE ALREADY! |
strivengoddess chapter 9 . 7/7/2013 I wasn't really interested in the plot, but the story was a nice read, and I thought everything was vary good with out over done facts or meaningless fillers. with that said There were a few giant plot wholes thru out, and some parts that were hard to understand how they fit, but once I relaxed and didn't over think the story I could enjoy with out needing to over think them. the ending was a bit rushed and not vary clear but a side from that the story was okay Thanks for posting |
Psycho Tangerine chapter 9 . 9/17/2011 Overall I liked this. Am I understanding that the mother was going after Tommy simply because she wanted to avoid getting in trouble for not doing anything about the father raping her as a baby? I also don't think Kira was too bright visiting Tommy when it could have resulted in ruining his chances at the trial. |
Ghostwriter chapter 9 . 6/5/2009 Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
StarlightNinjaThief chapter 9 . 1/29/2009 gr8 fic but im a bit confused by tommys endin |
BadWolf95 chapter 9 . 10/25/2008 When I finished reading this, and started writing this review, the only things that came to mind were '...' I don't know why. Wait, yes I do. Because it was so freakin' amazing. I love a Tommy/Kira relationship, father/daughter-wise, perfectly platonic, and you captured it perfectly. That dialogue in court about Tommy failing Kira's test (Chapter 5) was. um, funny! Hehe. And just.. Aww. Do I have your written permission to kill Kira's 'father'? Coz if Tommy doesn't get there first.. wait, let Tommy get there first. It'll be more painful. XD You. Rockness. (And so do Tommy, Kira, and Trent!) |
Dark Yellow Dino chapter 9 . 10/18/2008 keep going very good. i think that kira and toomy should get together. |
Itachi's apprentice chapter 9 . 10/6/2008 If Tommy and Trent ever meet Kira dad, they will go evill white and green ranger on him. |
guardianranger chapter 9 . 10/5/2008 Hi! Love your story |
DaggerFyre chapter 9 . 10/5/2008 I really enjoyed this story. I am glad that Tommy was found innocent. But you have left some interesting points open. Why did Tommy go "all green ranger" on Kim before, and why did Jason and Rocky have to subdue him? And what is he going to do this time that he won't be caught at? |
PinkRangerV chapter 9 . 10/5/2008 I don't wanna know what *that* last bit was about...LMAO. OMG...poor, poor Kira...sic the Yellows on him! |
GinaStar chapter 9 . 10/5/2008 I loved it! ;) Excellent two chappies! Very well written! I loved the twist thatou tell you threw in at the end! lol..Suggestion? What if, after the way her mom reacted, Dr. O ends up adopting Kira..(yes, I know you said that she was 18!) Honorary adoption...since she looks at Dr. O more as a father figure..At least until she & Trent get married (in the sequel, of course!). lol..can you tell that I'm looking forward to your sequel? |