Reviews for Panty Inspection
SlytherinIceFaery chapter 4 . 9/30/2008
okay that was really good though I still like the panty inspection game better. Just to point out (unless I total missed it even after reading it a second time) you never had a character say Panty inspection, so I don’t think you passed the challenge.
SlytherinIceFaery chapter 3 . 9/30/2008
I liked this one much better then the first one, though I think I it would have been even better if it was one of the other guys because I have never been a huge Lee fan but I think it was great. Though I don’t think you completely pasted because you could say there could be a sequel with the other three.
SlytherinIceFaery chapter 2 . 9/30/2008
first I have a question, who is Sai. I haven’t watched Naruto in a long time and I don’t remember him. Second, that was great. loved it!
Leighaf chapter 4 . 9/24/2008
Nice little Lemon and not a bad plot either but even reading it twice I can't see where you've referred to the phrase 'Panty inspection'.
wrenbailey chapter 4 . 9/24/2008
So I'm hitting two birds with one stone:

T- Loved the whole twisted threesome. and the fact that you had voyeurs also made my day. I have to say I was alittle thrown by the whole Kakashi at the end though...but I have grown to accept you making all the guys slash fiends.

K- well that was interesting. Never thought of Temari and Itachi...I think the best part was the sharingan moment because that is so something he would do.

T-what is our next challenge my dear?
Leighaf chapter 3 . 9/24/2008
Wow you found a great trio to play the game, who could resist watching 3 hot boys play such a fun game. Well done.
DrakarysxUnbroken chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
I wonder what the next challenge will be...o.O
DrakarysxUnbroken chapter 4 . 9/24/2008
Let me just say that when you went there, you went there. My favorite part about using Itachi in my fics is the Sharingan and you did just that. I loved it. It was a little gruesome though. You can be so violent sometimes! What did you have when you were writing this chapter?

Still though...I enjoyed it. I love Itachi and Temari needed a little excitement from him. How can you say no to an Uchiha? His 'inspection' was something I wish I could get from...never mind. This was also a fun and exciting pairing so right on. Though I have no idea what you were drinking, I still loved it. It was so funny to me for some reason. And of course, there's always the one liner that you throw in.

“I’ve seen you with the Nara. He can’t measure up.” Itachi muttered before throwing Temari over his shoulder and carrying her to her room.-Greatest line ever!
Adnacia chapter 3 . 9/24/2008
Speechless. *Stutters for a moment*

That was dirty! Though I did laugh when Neji said Lee was who he liked. That was the most interesting threeway. I really don't know what to say.

And Kakashi/Guy/Itachi? I get Kakashi/Itachi (Has a secret fangirl moment) and Kakashi/Guy, but Itachi/Guy? Um...Yeah.

Good job though. *Still speechless*
Leighaf chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
rofl aww bless his cotton socks, he's so naive but imaginative, goodness help the poor boy if the girls had taken him to a more adult shop! I think you've hit the canon on the head, Sai is definitely in character.
DrakarysxUnbroken chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
LOL Loved it! It was so cute. I could see Sai doing something like this. I'm sure he'd be totally fascinated by the intricate designs of women's undergarments. LOL I love how he was picking out things for each lady and the whole Tsunade thing had me cracking up. Great job!
Adnacia chapter 2 . 9/24/2008
That was adorable! I love Sai. I just giggled as Sai did his "panty inspection" and imagined who belonged in what.