that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

do i love to see where you can take this

I would love to see this made into a full story.

nicely done

I like it :D i Agree with the kakashi bit , He's a pathetic a good oneshot,not to long and rambly! Keep writing ;D

Nice... would probably lead to a jounin level naruto which isn't really a bad thing. especially if he cracks sasuke's mini me hard enough to make him sterile then they'd need itachi in the village.

It's a shame this isn't longer. It'd be a wonderful first chapter.

Interesting. Hope you make it to multi chap.

AWESOME!

I HOPE U DO GO THROUGH AND MAKE A STORY BASED ON THIS!

THAT WOULD BE EVEN BETTER!

well, i would say go with it, as long as you stop the first person crap.

I like it and owould like to see if you can make another story outta this. Plus you very rarely see naruto paired with ayame believeably.

nice, it WOULD do well as a basis for another fic.

dont know if yuo have yet, i start from the bottom and work up.

Well, I personally think it shouldn't be a one-shot. Definetely a good story to go with that personality. Keep up the good work.

I like that a lot you should have that as a story line or something because you can have naruto acting as himself inside of was the stupid leaf village would never think of happening 'Naruto Uzumaki's Mask falling off' and Naruto never making that stupid promise to that ugly pink hair girl for the return of the emo-stink-up-the-a** well I have to cut this short I have to go to school bye!